|Reviews for The Girl with the Sugar Lips|
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/13
Love reading it from EPV. You did a great job. Also loved the original but for me hearing the male point of view is always more interesting. Thank you for the editing, sometimes stories are so poorly edited that I actually get a head ache from all the mental changes. Looking forward to reading future works.
| cullensrule chapter 20 . 4/29
Thank you for Edward's side of the story. It was great to see his side of the story.
| amogle chapter 20 . 1/27
| pnkats chapter 20 . 1/27
such a perfect ending. as always I love Edwards pov a lot. so glad you gave us this
| Sara aka Nikki Black chapter 16 . 1/27
I had forgotten that they ruined their night. I wish Jasper had reached them sooner so neither one would have gotten hurt.
| DutchGirl01 chapter 20 . 1/25
Loved the ending, thanks so much for sharing this story with us.
| melissamary55 chapter 20 . 1/24
Love it and can't wait for the epi and what the future has for them
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/22
| Romana973 chapter 20 . 1/24
Thanks for a great chapter!
| midnitereader chapter 20 . 1/24
It's wonderful to see their story from Edward's POV. He's such a worrier. He knows to make the right decisions where work is concerned, but with love he's just as uncertain as everyone else. He's grown so much. He's learned it's okay to move on and find love again. It's okay to be happy. I can't wait to see what the future holds for them.
| NKubie chapter 20 . 1/23
I've really enjoyed the story from the EPOV! I hadn't realized how truly nervous he was.
| Mistydeb chapter 20 . 1/23
Aww, poor Edward, he nearly wrapped himself up in knots there for a bit, he really does over think everything. At least she said yes, even if she isn’t ready just yet. His journey has been a long one, but he got there in the end. Debbie
| Payton79 chapter 20 . 1/23
Awww, I loved that proposal. I was a bit disappointed it took them so long to get married after it. Maybe the epilogue to this version can shed some light on that.
| jule2 chapter 20 . 1/23
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 20 . 1/23
I loved the andtory and its counterpart.
You brought them to such a lovely place!
I’m so glad you shared with us.