Well written indeed! What a wonderful twist already! I quite like this one!

Great start! But did you mean the Peverell family ring, instead of the Percival family ring?

c'est quand la suite ?!
j'aime bien :)

oh dear, I don't think I have been so excited for a story in a long time. The word are like a symphony that I can repeat listening to over and over again. Truly wonderful.

:D

Interesting, so this means that The Avengers will never meet and 'make a movie', I wonder how you're going to do that now... I did notice a few spelling mistakes throughout this chapter, so you may want to proof read it again, especially Tom Hiddleston's quote (whether, not weather) :)
Looking forward to the next chapter!

I like it so far

Ooooh, I absolutely love the way this is going! I'm eager to read more!

Great beginning.

Interesting. I wonder if she'll find out who cursed her infertility.

I really like your first chapter. It's so different from what we're used to read in this fandom ! Hope you will continue this.

Interesting and intriguing start. Hope you update soon

Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you take it.

Grunts like caveman, "Me Loki, you my Woman, go make food than we make baby."
Hahahahaha!