Reviews for A New Life
Leader of coc chapter 30 . 10/21
new chapter please
Guest chapter 4 . 9/26
Why leave the clone for them to use? Why not bring it or destroy it? Amazingly stupid risk.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/26
Since when does Naruto kill on a whim? Especially what is likely normal non evil security guards. Being the ones for the outter normal facility and not the secret portion?

Thats f'd up.
RuneFather chapter 2 . 9/20
Awesome
RuneFather chapter 1 . 9/19
Awesome
ivancit chapter 2 . 7/23
hi can i as if she is still using madara body as a vessel after their transmigration
WizzyTheWizard chapter 5 . 6/26
Maybe not put interlude in the title, I know almost nothing happened in this chapter but with Interlude being in the title I almost just skipped it entirely.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23
. Conectar Naruto con Young Justice de la forma como la que lo hizo Shinobi Justice Vol.1

. En este universo el mundo de Young Justice podria ademas ser una mezcla de DC Comics , Invincible / Image Comics , Marvel Comics y por supuesto el anime y franquicia My Hero Academia en donde combinamos superheroes y otros conceptos en el mundo de DC

. El argumento esta conformado por Temporadas y episodios de Naruto y Young Justice

. Creando 1 mundo donde todas estas series siempre han sido 1 mismo universo
Guest chapter 32 . 6/17
Have you quit this story?
Powerscaling chapter 4 . 4/12
Naruto is someone who can fight on a level above most of the Justice League, and also possesses years of experience as a ninja, yet he struggles with an early series young justice mission? Your power scaling is all over the place. You either should have made him less powerful or made the mission more difficult because with the power level and skill you’ve shown him to have, he should’ve basically walked through that facility with absolutely no difficulties without even scratching his full strength.
Guest chapter 32 . 4/12
So I'm going to guess that you've given up on this story for the foreseeable future.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/20
So is naruto the new juubi or something
akirathewolflord chapter 1 . 2/7
You're story sounded interesting but I was immediately turned off by the 1st person perspective for Naruto so I couldn't get into it sorry
Dauntes chapter 5 . 1/31
Really enjoyed the interlude. Thanks.
freedomringer chapter 32 . 10/30/2023
Finally caught up. Very good story overall and awesome chapter. I myself believe you've done a damn good job not bashing, and making sure everything makes sense. What people do not understand is that comparing power levels and skills is difficult at best when doing it IN UNIVERSE. Cross versal comparison (CVC) is down right impossible. Best you can do is find the thread of logic and stick to it. Or come with excuses as to why certain situations happen. From all you're showing us it seems that Naruto will be basically creating his own team from OCs and outside minor characters like the outsiders and Static Shock (if Static ain't on here I'd be disappointed but understanding). That said if I may suggest a name that you can, at least I hope helps you, call Naruto's team: call Nirvit renamed to 'Village Hidden by the Maelstrom' (Narutogakure, stupid but would be hilarious as a joke) and the team Team Maelstrom or Shadow Team
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