Finally caught up. Very good story overall and awesome chapter. I myself believe you've done a damn good job not bashing, and making sure everything makes sense. What people do not understand is that comparing power levels and skills is difficult at best when doing it IN UNIVERSE. Cross versal comparison (CVC) is down right impossible. Best you can do is find the thread of logic and stick to it. Or come with excuses as to why certain situations happen. From all you're showing us it seems that Naruto will be basically creating his own team from OCs and outside minor characters like the outsiders and Static Shock (if Static ain't on here I'd be disappointed but understanding). That said if I may suggest a name that you can, at least I hope helps you, call Naruto's team: call Nirvit renamed to 'Village Hidden by the Maelstrom' (Narutogakure, stupid but would be hilarious as a joke) and the team Team Maelstrom or Shadow Team

I honestly didn't think she was homophobic. I think you explained it well enough in your story. She's a person outside of time and outside of her world. While modern Elemental Nations would probably not have the same laws as past (especially warring states period and pre Kaguya chaotic period) it also seems to not be encouraged either. I'd probably put as a don't ask don't tell. I mean there is no immediate pushing off of buildings or executions for gay couples in Naruto but there is an underlying sense of disgust unless it's from perverts thinking of two women at the same time as we can infer from Jiraiya's "research" usually revolving around women only hotsprings. As such Kaguya's knee-jerk reaction is spot on especially her own admonishment for thinking like that when she needed to think about it with a clear head. Given time I know she'd come to not care at all when it's brought up or shown, and that's exactly what it should be. Homosexual couples should be treated as heterosexual couples: something that is so normal it elicits no reaction either for or against it unless personal feelings are involved for the individuals

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Nah. This is just trashy. Read it for non sensical wishfulfillment and nothing more.
1st. Trashy wishfullment. The author just gives Naruto many powers that he didnt have originally just for the luls of it.
2nd. The author bends logic and reality to take the story wherever he wants, even if it makes no sense. One moment Naruto is beating an army in a second and fighting "Darkseid", and a few chapters later he is having problems with sidevillains and nameless characters. And being thrown into the kids league, after beating someone that the actual LEague could not.
3rd- there are endless teransitions and POV changes. Sometimes you are barely figuring out who you are following and the story is already changing POVs again.

Opening up the story with naruto using darkseid as a punching bag really makes any fight after it seem pretty pathetic if he takes longer than an instant. It's like watching the flash run in circles for 10 minutes before finally taking out the villain that they could have taken out in seconds.

eu li essa história toda ate aqui, qual personagem ele já conhecia?

work from home jobs

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Great chapter...loved the whole shenanigan of the JL deciding what to do. Good to see Canary and SHayera standing up against Batman. As great as the hero is, people and media showcase him as the most wisest and best person whose word is law and truth.

Awesome chapter can't wait to see next update

Had to make a small comment on the fact that you actually think a Naruto character would even get tagged by a bullet. Yada Yada, it's an AU your rules. I get that. however, even Kid Naruto should have no problem in taking a bullet to the face. he's faster than sound. He hits harder than any bullet can mimic, can tank a chidori through his chest and live, granted Kurama’s chakra helped him. Anyways, there is no way in hell a shinobi in the Naruto verse can even be hit. Your average genin is hitting speeds faster than sound the moment they come out of the academy. Everyone above a genin is basically outspeeding lightning at the least and can carve their way through mountains. Your story is genuinely a great read. However, I just find it a bit blasphemous that you think a bullet could actually do something to any shinobi.

this kinda feels like the making of marvel civil war lines are being drawn even more so when earthling children trafficking is brought into the light. yes they fought parademons which were mutated enslaved humans (assuming adults) now they are going up against enslaved powered children too. someone needs to remind/ask the heros why they became heros in the first place.
sidenote Naruto's allegiance was never to the league it was always to kaguya. He can easily say he was protecting the princess.
bringing pam to this mission will do good cause she has a soft for kids so seeing kids trafficking should make her mad.
it's funny everyone acknowledges the way Conner could be the mole but brushes it off
hope for more soon
cheers

Hola muchas gracias por el capítulo espero con ansias el siguiente

I tried to read this story because the concept seemed interesting but the continuous POV shifts just destroys any immersion in the is annoying and makes it difficult to enjoy the story.
You could have kept the whole story in 3rd person POV and it would have been much better.
There is a reason most stories are in 3rd person POV.

... loved these updates just reread from the beginning love the hard hitting aspects on killing/vs no killing and all that.

only thing that threw me was a few chaps back you went into lgbq stuff which kinda felt left field for this type of story but eh it's a thing.

thanks for writing even if I don't always agree the story as a whole has been incredible.