A New Life
By: The Ethereal Lord

cool when you have time try and finish or at least finish book one and two please until I see more I cant properly describe or review the story all I can say is stuff I hope for that's it which I might just repeat others that hope for more.

this could be pretty good update soon

there were parts I liked (team selection, black-opt M.O., possible dark hero vibe) and parts I dislike (time frame it started in, what seem like the timeline for the league, the ages a small amount), as for possible suggestions 1) maybe add Starfire or Blackfire to the team 2) have Robin be less like he was personality wise in Young Justice 3) let at least Naruto and Kaguya be allow to possible kill 4) no superman clone on the team, unless he has all the powers he should have but even then I say go with a clone of Zod instead

well... this is a new take on things... a nice take I must say
well done and keep the good work up

So how did Sasuke give Naruto his power, did he pull an Obito and give Naruto his Rinne-sharingan?

this is awesome so far

A great start! I always love a Naruto and DC Comic Cross-over. From what I see here is that this fight is placed in the 52 world. I lvoed how Naruto fought against the armies of Darkseid and how the shinobi kicked his ass.

I do hope that Naruto will pair up with Kaguya, I don't want them with someone else. Also I noticed that this was or is another reality from Naruto's side.

I look forward to more of this story.

Why not make Japan Naruto and Kaguya's "home territory", you can add a lot of things to this to make it more interesting, from summoning the IJN spirits back to defend Japan's shores straight from Arpegio, the Blue Steel and Kancolle or Kantai Collection, to adding the Yokai and Mystic/Magic to become Japan's defenders from Kyoto Yokai Faction(Highschool DxD) to the Negima!,

like it

I like it probably will only get better as it goes along

This is awesome! More!

A very good chapter

There not sure what to think of Naruto given he is a trained Killer in there eyes, It would kind of be an insult to Naruto if he's asked to join a team of kids and learn with them but I also the benefits in learning how heroes operate.

Little curious both Ninja have instant kill moves, will there ever be used I wonder given how high strung a lot of the heroes here are.