So happy to read a new chapter. Very interested in where the story will go. Keep doing the good work 3

Are you still writing this story? It's so good!

they were finally getting somewhere until the last two chapters took a dark turn.

Oi

Tudo bem?

Uma história incrível..Deus abençoe sempre..Tomara que tenha um final juntos...Por favor atualize suas outras histórias...obrigado

Just thinking about how much I enjoyed rereading this yesterday.

I looked at my review (posted hours ago now)], and I swear I wasn't drunk (nor am I 12)- just sleep deprived from staying up 'til 3 am.

Anyway. I sincerely appreciated your work. I can't wait to see how you handle 4th year! I'm optimistic that Thorfinn will be able to sneak in to Hogwarts during the Triwizard tornament (maybe fake being a Durmstrang student, or legitimately get to visit?). Course he's bisy with Quiddith, so that may not pan out. .

Also- there's alot of irony in how by attemptimg to destroy Hwrmione, Thorfinn is now destroying himself. And his Quidditch career has never stopped being threatened. I sympathize.

Whoah!

I just finished rereadinf, amd and its been a rollar cosster. I feel bad for everyone,and just want wveryone to be happy. And Hermione and Thorfinn to continue having a strong relationship. Ayyy. Thorfinn getting qith girls on the side make me want to hit something. Hermione has the excuse that she doesn't know. Theo is a worm-a useful worm, but slimy. Draco seems like he could be sweet, but I've never liked him,so no.

Poor Finn :( Getting roped info joining the death eaters.

Holy crap. I just got through re-reading to catch up. Things are getting real. Finn's slow decent into madness has been such an adventure. I look forward to seeing what else you have in store for us!

Loved this! And I was so excited to see an update! I love this story!

Oh my gosh, you updated it! Squeeeee! You can feel the inner conflict in Thorfinn so strongly in this chapter.

I was looking forward to this chapter my God! I'm super glad you're back and I hope you come back with some crisp chapters for your hungry fans! For my part I loved it even though the chapter was short but that's what it takes. I can't wait for grade 4 to start to see a bit of Hermione's development without Thor it could be really interesting, her relationships with potential boys: Theo, Victor, or Malfoy or even Ron? I didn't quite understand how Thor is going to act like she's not his fiancée since he's already doing that anymore, I mean it's not like he's loyal to him or anything, he doesn't. has no qualms about fucking all the girls he can without worrying about how hard it hurts Hermione what an asshole! I hope Hermione does not continue on this desperate path where she just wants to perform the rites with Thor as a sweet, loyal and faithful little girl while he is doing good with the other girls. This chapter marks a break like in the Harry Potter books themselves and I congratulate you on your talented writing! I feel the anguish and the change in this chapter the breaking up of the wizarding world but also of Thor and Hermione and I hope that Hermione will be a fighter as she is and that she will not let herself be brought down. Im a french fan I hope u will understand that review ! Thank you so much for this story

My heart hurts so much for the both of them. I know it’s a full angst right ahead but ugh I can’t wait until they can finally be together.

Why?! Why is Finn listening to Antonin? He has zero experience with this and yet Finn has completely given up. She will never forgive him for hurting her like this. I hope she starts knocking those Rites down as soon as her school year starts. It serves Finn right. He’s going to turn her into the most vengeful witch ever.

I'm so happy you wrote a new chapter I just re-read the whole damn thing ahahahaha *chef's kiss*

This story is crushing my soul! I’m sad for Finn, and Draco, and Hermione and Antonin. The dark lord coming back is like Covid, freaking destroying everyone’s lives.

Lovely chapter!