|Reviews for A Promise Unspoken|
| Bren Gail chapter 25 . 6/5/2020
The scene with her little cousin was precious. That cliffhanger, though. Woah.
| Bren Gail chapter 24 . 6/5/2020
| Bren Gail chapter 23 . 6/5/2020
Phenomenal chapter. Marvelous cliffhanger.
| Bren Gail chapter 22 . 6/5/2020
| Bren Gail chapter 21 . 6/5/2020
I tend to lean on the theory that the time turner ages Hermione faster than had she had a normal third year. With that theory she would be older than slightly older in these scenes. Although, the scenes were well written, her age was disconcerting at points.
I have grown to like Antonin in this story, but his actions in this story reminded me of what he is capable of. I look forward to reading about how Hermione is effected in the future by what he did to her memory within this chapter.
| Bren Gail chapter 20 . 6/5/2020
Woah! What a chapter...what a cliffhanger.
| Bren Gail chapter 19 . 6/5/2020
Thorfinn in Hogsmeade and his conversation and interaction with Hermione was great! I enjoy their banter.
| Bren Gail chapter 18 . 6/5/2020
I adore how Theo is portrayed. Dolohov claiming her as part of his house was a pleasant surprise. Also, what Theo revealed about Draco made my Dramione heart smile. I literally laughed aloud when I read that Thorfinn had set an entire pub on fire.
| Bren Gail chapter 17 . 6/5/2020
I loved it. Thorfinn is good for Hermione. I love how the dynamic is evolving.
| mi-shell87 chapter 39 . 6/4/2020
I decided to reread the story so I could get back into the minds of Hermione and Thorfinn, glad I did because I had forgotten some of it and not read the last few chapters (shock horror!). So, so happy that gardening got your muse working for this story because I absolutely love it and made me love this pairing, so I hope the muse strikes again and we get another chapter :-) (Although I'm really hoping for a HEA for these guys, it seems unlikely at the moment) :-(
| Bren Gail chapter 16 . 6/4/2020
I loved it. I enjoy reading their character interaction and witty dialogue.
| Bren Gail chapter 15 . 6/4/2020
He was certainly a pleasant surprise!
| Bren Gail chapter 14 . 6/4/2020
I adore Quincy.
| Bren Gail chapter 13 . 6/4/2020
Astonishing revelation within this chapter. Brilliant.
| Bren Gail chapter 12 . 6/4/2020
Oh...bombshell revelation. Here's to hoping she sends him beads for Christmas every year.