Reviews for A Promise Unspoken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The scene with her little cousin was precious. That cliffhanger, though. Woah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Explosive developments. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Phenomenal chapter. Marvelous cliffhanger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dynamite developments. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tend to lean on the theory that the time turner ages Hermione faster than had she had a normal third year. With that theory she would be older than slightly older in these scenes. Although, the scenes were well written, her age was disconcerting at points. I have grown to like Antonin in this story, but his actions in this story reminded me of what he is capable of. I look forward to reading about how Hermione is effected in the future by what he did to her memory within this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! What a chapter...what a cliffhanger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thorfinn in Hogsmeade and his conversation and interaction with Hermione was great! I enjoy their banter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore how Theo is portrayed. Dolohov claiming her as part of his house was a pleasant surprise. Also, what Theo revealed about Draco made my Dramione heart smile. I literally laughed aloud when I read that Thorfinn had set an entire pub on fire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. Thorfinn is good for Hermione. I love how the dynamic is evolving. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I decided to reread the story so I could get back into the minds of Hermione and Thorfinn, glad I did because I had forgotten some of it and not read the last few chapters (shock horror!). So, so happy that gardening got your muse working for this story because I absolutely love it and made me love this pairing, so I hope the muse strikes again and we get another chapter :-) (Although I'm really hoping for a HEA for these guys, it seems unlikely at the moment) :-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. I enjoy reading their character interaction and witty dialogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He was certainly a pleasant surprise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore Quincy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Astonishing revelation within this chapter. Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...bombshell revelation. Here's to hoping she sends him beads for Christmas every year. |