Reviews for A Promise Unspoken
Bren Gail chapter 11 . 6/4/2020
Pandora was charming. This story is brilliantly written.
Bren Gail chapter 10 . 6/4/2020
Bren Gail chapter 9 . 6/4/2020
Bren Gail chapter 8 . 6/4/2020
Perfect! I like how covert yet transparent Thorfinn is with Hermione about his revenge in this chapter.
Bren Gail chapter 7 . 6/4/2020
Loved it! Thorfinn is so good at being bad.
Bren Gail chapter 6 . 6/4/2020
I loved it, from start to finish.
Bren Gail chapter 5 . 6/4/2020
Thorfinn may be playing her for a fool now, but hopefully years from this chapter, he won't. I am highly intrigued with the significance of the hair beads...did she tie herself to him in someway? I can hardly wait until this plot line is revealed. Also, I cannot wait until its revealed what properties he purchased...could it be the building where her parents practice Dentistry?

I've 30 more chapters to read and am so excited to read them.

Her playing with his hair is innocent yet so profound. Appropriate for her age yet intimate at the same time.
Bren Gail chapter 4 . 6/4/2020
Ooooh. I wonder if what happened in this chapter is what created Dolohov's fascination with her. I am really loving how Thorfinn is portrayed, he has just the right balance of antagonizing and attempting to protect/teach her.
Bren Gail chapter 3 . 6/4/2020
I love this. A feisty and sassy Hermione is my favorite portrayal of her. I simply adore how Thorfinn is portrayed as an Alpha male.
Bren Gail chapter 2 . 6/4/2020
The list is brilliant as is the characterization of the characters. The conversation between Severus and Thorfinn is my favorite part of the chapter.
Bren Gail chapter 1 . 6/4/2020
The synopsis shared on social media had me hooked, but after reading this introduction, I am choosing to stay on the hook. I never before thought to ship Thorfinn Rowle and Hermione Granger, but I am definitely intrigued now.
Jces999 chapter 39 . 6/3/2020
I was so excited to see the update email in my inbox & it didn’t disappoint! I have a bad feeling for Hermione &Finn - I don’t think they are going to get their HEA. Thank you so much for your writing - it’s excellent.
thelodown chapter 39 . 6/3/2020
WOW. What a chapter. I decided to re-read the whole story since it had been a while. It’s no secret that Rowle becomes a death eater in canon but I was wondering how you were going to get him into it. I’m sure all quidditch will be cancelled once the war breaks out and he’ll have no excuse not to join..

Thank you for the update!
Jenny0406 chapter 39 . 6/3/2020
Oh. Shit.
RarkMuffalo chapter 39 . 6/3/2020
I am so glad I reread this entire story. You’re phenomenal. I actually can’t put it into words how incredibly talented you are. Each story you write grips me so hard that I forget to be a human for a few days whilst I binge. I know it might be a while again before you update this story and that’s fine because maybe I’ll reread it all again. I love it. The way every character interacts twists at my heart and soul. I feel like I have no idea what will happen next but neither does any of the characters which goes to show how bloody amazing you are. Until your next update!
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