Reviews for A Promise Unspoken
Guest chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
no recap? do u really expect ppl to remember what’s happening after not updating for 3 years lol?
Guest chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Wow. WOW. I feel like I’m at the climax of a billion dollar action movie. Seriously. Holy fuck this is incredible! Your brain is just *chefs kiss* kitten!
Lily chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Oh my sweets. Poor finn. Poor hermione. But thank god for toshka. Clear headed rage clean up.

Thank you muse for inspiring! Thank you kitten for writing so well!
Barkha chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
That was awesome! I hope you would give Hermione's thoughts on this whole thing in the next chapter, which I really really really hope you won't be late to update
( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)(‿).
Guest chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
I love it! I’ve been waiting for a chapter for years and this didn’t disappoint at all ️
em973 chapter 38 . 6/1/2020
Omg! Love this story! Can’t wait to see it evolve further and find out how hermione manages the rites and thorfinn! Will she sneak him in or even complete them with Theo, or plot twist Draco!? Can’t wait for more updates xxx
livngdeadgrlxx chapter 39 . 6/1/2020
Omg this is the first time reading this story and I didn’t stop. I love this! I love all your works really! I cannot wait to see updates for this!
aliciabeuden chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
It's been over a year since I first read this story. It was my first foray into Hermione/Thorfinn. Thank You for updating one of my favorite fictions.
SessyPeaches87 chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Awww, love the this story! I want me a Thor! I love his character! I will patiently wait for the next chapter!
Wynter Phoenix chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Oooh, fabulous chapter!
Madison5512 chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Awesome thanks
NeoQBirdie chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Thanks for updating. I always enjoy new chapters from you.
Piper chapter 38 . 5/29/2020
Viktor Krum and Fin having to both vie for Hermione’s affections )
EvanescoVeritas chapter 39 . 5/31/2020
Um, okay... Yikes! This is getting complicated! I’m sure you have everything plotted out already, but I have to put my two cents in. I think there are a couple of decent solutions regarding how Hermione can satisfy her Rites at school without driving Finn insane: 1) They could tell Snape everything, and he could contact Finn whenever Dumbledore leaves the school. Finn could Floo in and help Hr fulfill her sexual requirements during those absences. 2) Hermione could recruit Theo (and maybe a few others if needed) to power through all the sex requirements in one night. Then have Dolohov knock Finn unconscious before she gets started so he can’t feel the torture of her actions. (Or at least can’t set people on fire.)

Regarding the pressure on Finn and Antonin to become Death Eaters, the most practical thing would be that at the end of 4th year, as soon as Voldemort is resurrected, they grab their loved ones and move to the other side of the planet. However, since that would suck the drama out of the story, I suggest that they either become double agents like Snape or form a splinter cell within the DEs. Also, I must note that Finn and Hermione’s Fiendfyre is going to come in handy for destroying Horcruxes!

Thanks for writing!
Thuy chapter 38 . 5/29/2020
Third read though and I still love this one above all your stories. I read your novel as well interesting super charged protagonist. Even caught me by surprise the abrupt end. I hope inspiration strikes you soon for this story. Stay safe!
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