Oh, this was fantastic! The idea of a Hogwarts Bucket List is wonderful and something I haven't come across before, which is hard to do with how much FanFic I read. I love your use of Snape here too - how he is looking out for his Slytherins & also already kind of hates Hermione, ha. Poor Hermione... I feel like she's in for a bit of a hard time.

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"'If she's the type of freaky kid who knows the terminology, professor, I don't reckon I'll have scarred her for life,' Thorfinn retorted, smirking."

"'Delightful,' Snape hissed, 'As always your gift for tact and your gentlemanly manners set you apart from your peers, Mr Rowle.' "

She really does have the worst timing I don't blame him for being so mad, Hermione needs to just walk away and not look back. Looking forward to your next update!

Damn, such a treat on a Sunday morning. I thought it was the strongest chapter you've written for this story so far. The tone was consistent and the banter was on point. Ace work!

Fun! Thanks for the update!

I like that Thorfinn appreciates her wit at least. The worst thing anybody could do, in my opinion, is underestimate Hermione Granger, first year or no. I look forward to seeing their future interactions, and I also look forward to a few years from now when she catches up with him physically and sexually.

Great chapter, loved the banter. Can't wait to read more.

Giraffe :)

Poor Hermione having his going after her cuz she did the right thing. I alway wonder what it would have been like if Hermione had a older brother who was a wizard. Maybe she wouldn't have followed the rules as much and wouldn't have been so alone and picked on. Great story can not wait to see what happens next.

AHHHHHH! SO GOOD! Hermione is like fire! The interactions are just perfect please don't stop writing this ever!

Love love love

Oooh! Loving this chapter! Good work, I'm really starting to like these two as a pairing! Looking forward to more! :)

I am so in love with this! Thank you! I really like the way you wrote Thor but I'm not sure About Hermione. I think she might be a little too advanced for her age but hey what do I know. Anyway please keep up the great work on this and your other tics. I'm looking forward to reading more!

I love them I love them I freaking love them

This is awesome. I love everything Hermione says. I am so excited about this story. Thank you for sharing it!

Lol, you go girl! Hermione is hilarious.

How strange is it that I loved his threat to her at the end? Omg, my spontaneous love of death eaters has ruined me.

Favouritism, damn.