Reviews for A Promise Unspoken
Lavirtu.2 chapter 24 . 3/15/2022
My god it's became intense, It so frustrated that everything is in front of her eyes and she didnt realise because of this fuking Antonin, even before when she askin Thor about it, she should have taken off the jewelry to check her theory
Lavirtu.2 chapter 23 . 3/15/2022
Daaaaaaaaamn but she cant solves it because of Antonin
MaddieHatter150 chapter 41 . 3/5/2022
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Please update! I am absolutely in love with and enthralled by this story! I HAVE TO KNOW! Please! You have to update! I know I’m being rude, just a little, but PLEASE, can you update? Pretty please with a cherry on top? I don’t like reading the sad bits, but I’m so ensnared that I have to keep reading! So please, can you maybe add it to your to-do list, or maybe move it up? THANK YOU! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! YOU’RE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR! Lots of love, wishing you all the best, and absolutely no writers-block. Muah!
Lovinlife12346 chapter 41 . 3/4/2022
this story is great
Guest chapter 41 . 2/14/2022
Glad to see this story getting some love. Can’t wait to see how 4th year and 5th year go
Sara chapter 41 . 2/7/2022
Please mistress throw me a bone 3
Lavirtu.2 chapter 22 . 2/4/2022
Thorfinn really is an animal, I love how realistic it is, he uses his fame to attract women. It is not perfect and even execrable. But damn I so want Hermione to have more experiences than she does with Theo. I don't want a perfect, prudish, faithful Hermione, like most fics I've read. I want an equally realistic one living her teenage years, especially as she is deceived and humiliated and finding out what Thor has done and why she reacts with all her flames. That she also decides to take revenge, to take pleasure and to torture him to make him pay. Maybe that's why Dolohov will try to kill her in fifth year? It's super humiliating for her this kind of reaction because I'm sure for other purebloods for whom the bonds of engagement are usual, it's obvious that she is related and cuckolded and it's really a shame for her , in her place I will be mortified to learn that in front of everyone I had reactions that showed that I was continually deceiving, humiliated, my heart aches for her. I still hope for a happy ending with Thor but not before many things, turnarounds, separations, marriages? why not imagine Hermione trying to start a new life with someone else but Thor doesn't give up, things like that, in any case I really hope that she gives him back this humiliation, this forced bond, this way abusive he had of imposing his choices and this bond on her and of making her suffer, of not being able to at least be decent and think that he made her suffer. For me he's a hypocrite, he seems to care about her but doesn't care about going to fuck other women knowing very well what's happening to her, it's really ugly of him. I love your story it is so intense. She takes my breath away.
Lavirtu.2 chapter 21 . 2/4/2022
I've never hated Anthonin so much, although I can understand his reasons, everyone is worried that they'll be caught together and Thor will be kicked out of the league or the team but I guess when he becomes a Death Eater it won't matter anymore. I wonder when it will happen, if in the finale there will be the attack or not, if Thor will participate in it, with a muggle born grandmother, I don't know how it could happen. I hope we will also have more details on the spells used by Thor when Hermione was petrified. I hope that by obstructing her memories, Hermione is less silly about Thor, she seemed to lose her mind with the link and I hope that she will be more attentive and open to other boys especially with this spell of maturation, Theo I see it well with her at the beginning of the fourth year before Victor, but also Draco why not with a special plot in fifth year with his mission, maybe Ron?
Lavirtu.2 chapter 20 . 2/4/2022
She compares Thor and Theo and I understand why we all do this but the day she learns about the link she will realize that it is surely the link that makes everything exceptionally good and unique, maybe she is not not even in love with him, that it is precisely the bond that awakens all that, after all the bond made her feel jealous without even knowing why, as if this bond creates a false feeling of love which in the end does not doesn't exist, I hope she finds out, that the jewels will be removed or thrown away to see how it goes without, especially if Thor later joins the Death Eaters. I hope Hermione doesn't make Thor come to Hogwarts, I think it's unfair that he takes advantage of life and fucks a lot of chicks when she has to stay prudish and faithful, I really hope that 'she will have lots of lovers and different experiences (one-night stands, things like that) before she can give him all that back, I'm also surprised at her passivity, she seems to be gradually becoming aware that there is an engagement bond and does not seem offended it is incomprehsenible, she who has such a strong character I expect a more violent reaction, arguments before she tears off all the jewels, even her hair with the pearl swinging in her face and never wanting to see him again
Lavirtu.2 chapter 19 . 2/1/2022
I'm a little disappointed with Hermione, I don't understand why she didn't just take the jewelry off to check it, then there would be a feeling and then she would know she was engaged. No need to even question Thorfinn, she could have checked it out on her own and if Thorfinn hasn't gone mad it's because she's not inappropriate with a boy yet, she should think about it
Lavirtu.2 chapter 18 . 2/1/2022
Yeeeeeeeeeeeees, Finally, Thor is going to get a glimpse of what he was doing to Hermione, I really like Theo, he's someone who is often forgotten but still has potential, I can't wait to see the sequel how it goes develop his relationship with Theo, why not Draco too after what we just learned, Victor, maybe Ron?
Lavirtu.2 chapter 17 . 1/31/2022
I just thought of something, if Hermione had magical reactions when Thorfinn tricked everyone around her into understanding especially those from pureblood families or even adults like teachers, what a humiliation for her; they must have figured out that she was somehow engaged and that she was also cheated. I loved the meeting of the parents I would like to know more about them and also the grandfather, he is present it seems to me.
Lavirtu.2 chapter 16 . 1/29/2022
Noooo she will suffer more now, mor she spends time with more it will be horrible when he will chag with other girls, Damn him he's horrible
Lavirtu.2 chapter 15 . 1/29/2022
I wish more with Scott, looks good for some experiences
Lavirtu.2 chapter 14 . 1/27/2022
What a motherfucker this Thor, even if Hermione is almost dead it does not prevent her from going elsewhere and doing what pleases her no matter how much she suffers, I hope with all my heart that in the sequel Hermione will do the same and even more
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