AHHHH This is sooo good! Please keep updating this I really want to see what will happen!

Eeeeek I'm sooo excited for this

Thorfinn - I am sure I knew the exact same jerk in high school - he was on the football team (said every girl ever). Snape! Countering Dumbledore's blatant favoritism with outright deviousness and disregard for rules. Awesome! I also like Thorfinn's POV regarding Snape - the mixture of fear, reverence, and possibly friendship forming. All in all, a great chapter, but the best was this:

Thorfinn scoffed, "Pretty sure the little brat saw my cock though."

"Delightful," Snape hissed, "As always your gift for tact and your gentlemanly manners set you apart from your peers, Mr Rowle."

LOVE IT

DEATH EATER HERMIONE FANFIC what I've been waiting for and never realized it until now. This is gonna be so fun.

I really like Snape here. This was a pretty awesome chapter and I like the dive into Thorfinn's head.

Well then, this should be interesting! Quite curious to see what he comes up with. :)

What a devious pair the two of them! Xx

Fantastic start to your story.

Mmmmmm me gusta mucho la historia, solo espero que Hermione con el tiempo sepa defenderse, no me gustaría que se dejara, siento que ella es un poco Slytherin en ese aspecto, después del troll de montaña ella ya no se queda callada. Hasta el próximo capítulo.

Great chapter! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Oh, I can't wait to see just how vindictive he gets before he [eventually & probably not by much] lightens up a little. :)

*shudders* He scares me and I don't honestly scare too easy. You have done a brilliant job with Thorfinn and I cannot wait for more of this! Thank you!

Oh, I feel rather afraid for the shit about to descend on Hermione. Damn, Severus is bringing the full on douche to the table. Ace chapter, delightfully funny, and I liked the addition of Phineas and the 'list'. (typos in PM)

Thor shouldn't underestimate the swot he is going after, hehe! Hehe! We just have to look at future Hermione's deed to know that she is one person you don't want to mess with. Good luck with revenge Finn Finn you will need it.