Reviews for A Promise Unspoken
Hi chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Eeeeek I'm sooo excited for this
iwasbotwp chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Thorfinn - I am sure I knew the exact same jerk in high school - he was on the football team (said every girl ever). Snape! Countering Dumbledore's blatant favoritism with outright deviousness and disregard for rules. Awesome! I also like Thorfinn's POV regarding Snape - the mixture of fear, reverence, and possibly friendship forming. All in all, a great chapter, but the best was this:

Thorfinn scoffed, "Pretty sure the little brat saw my cock though."

"Delightful," Snape hissed, "As always your gift for tact and your gentlemanly manners set you apart from your peers, Mr Rowle."
leslucids chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
susiequeen300 chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
DEATH EATER HERMIONE FANFIC what I've been waiting for and never realized it until now. This is gonna be so fun.
Alytiger chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
I really like Snape here. This was a pretty awesome chapter and I like the dive into Thorfinn's head.
damecaite42 chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Well then, this should be interesting! Quite curious to see what he comes up with. :)
articcat621 chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
What a devious pair the two of them! Xx
roon0 chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
Fantastic start to your story.
AngieCassio chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Mmmmmm me gusta mucho la historia, solo espero que Hermione con el tiempo sepa defenderse, no me gustaría que se dejara, siento que ella es un poco Slytherin en ese aspecto, después del troll de montaña ella ya no se queda callada. Hasta el próximo capítulo.
Lady Evora chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Great chapter! Thank you for sharing it with us!
Freya Ishtar chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Oh, I can't wait to see just how vindictive he gets before he [eventually & probably not by much] lightens up a little. :)
HenriaSownbinder chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
*shudders* He scares me and I don't honestly scare too easy. You have done a brilliant job with Thorfinn and I cannot wait for more of this! Thank you!
HannaSun chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Oh, I feel rather afraid for the shit about to descend on Hermione. Damn, Severus is bringing the full on douche to the table. Ace chapter, delightfully funny, and I liked the addition of Phineas and the 'list'. (typos in PM)
pgoodrichboggs chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Thor shouldn't underestimate the swot he is going after, hehe! Hehe! We just have to look at future Hermione's deed to know that she is one person you don't want to mess with. Good luck with revenge Finn Finn you will need it.
DutchScorRosefan chapter 2 . 9/28/2016
Snape you bad boy!

I checked The parolee and his princess. Lovely!
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