Let the mind trap go id love to see what the clever witch could fix where the wizards failed to think of.

ahhhhh Finn! what a mess.

Just caught up, really interesting fic! Although, for the life of me, I can't help but think Thorfinn severely overcomplicated things. Obviously the field has changed with the rise of Voldy - although he hasn't actually risen, yet - but prior to that Thor should have just planned to marry Hermione the day she was of age.
She'll turn 17 a month into her 6th year which means they could be married with 2 years to complete the rites. There's no reason Dumbledore should have a problem with a husband visiting his wife, so getting permission to visit Hogwarts would be easy. Getting away to perform the rites would be harder, but they COULD HAVE made use of Hermione's time-turner, had they planned this out by her 3rd year. She may have judged Muggle Studies and Divination a waste of time but I'm sure Hermione wouldn've been willing to keep up with them it some Slytherin pointed out the utility of having access to a time turner in later years.

Anyway, it was a great read.

I love this. I have only recently discovered Hermione/Thorfinn and I am obsessed.
Please please pleeeease keep updates coming

Please more, love it , I hope they get their shit together and become one, love the coupling please more

Fabulous chapter!

they are just having a horrible time can't wait to read more

Ahhhhhhh ffs

I can’t imagine how Thor will deal with his feelings whenever Hermione completes a rite, more so when they get more physical and intimate with Theo… but I can’t help but feel a glee of pleasure on Hermione’s behalf knowing Hermione’s going to be with someone else who isn’t Thorn - I bet it will eat him alive, making the sorry more interesting for sure

Angry Finn I can’t wait PUAHA

Love the tension here!

Well what did you expect from that, Finn?

My god this chapter is awesome, I love how she held her head up high against Thorfinn, and I hope she stops hurting herself thinking she's unfaithful, this 4th is going to be amazing for Hermione and I hope she will take every opportunity to live a beautiful adolecence with her own experiences. The chapter is really short, I hope your updates will be done more often !

I really love this story and enjoy reading it thank you for sharing

What a jerk! I knew though this was coming. I think Finn could choose a different path. Antonin is sort of a bad influence especially when it comes to Hermione.