Reviews for M1N470: Reforged |
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Lehw chapter 6 . 1/27/2017 Though This Is Unrealated To The Question Of The Chapter Or Through Whole Thing Undressing Thing Is Pretty Satisfying huh... If Is A Human Or Robot Or A Android Or Whatever As Long As It Have A Humanoid Body Undressing Can Be...PRETTY HOT AND SEXY HELL YEAH ! Though If It Is Object Of Food Then Well You Know... Satisfaction Curiosity Is Truly Indeed The Devil Temptation Well No Matter What The Result Is Is The Emotion That Matter The Most |
AGuyPassingBy chapter 6 . 1/19/2017 Once again, hello! Glad to see that you're still alive. Totally understand holidays, drama and rewrites. Anyway, just to offer another opinion, I really like where this is going. Having somewhat different motivations for Akihiko joining up with the group make things more interesting, and I'm also glad to see that the "Ikutsuki Talks" are still a thing. It's interesting to see Sho having a more prominent role early on than before, but I think I like it. But to be honest, the only reason why some may potentially dislike it is if Sho felt forced, but I definitely don't think that's the case. And of course, I am anxious to see in about 10 chapters who !? (or as I shall call them, NANI!?) is. Also, I don't think I've ever answered any of these Questions of the Chapter. So, honestly, yes, I have done that. It wasn't even that cool either, as I had thought it was at the time. I used to be such an opportunist, and tried to establish myself to others as only that. Back in them middle school days, if someone wanted help with homework, I'd ask what I'd get in return. They needed help with a certain other, what's in it for me? One time though, I realised what could possibly come of that, as this person in question offered up something a bit too much. Something illegal. Refusing, that kinda pushed me in the direction of being less of an ass. I didn't like the possibility of facing jail time, and even though that was only one incident, I steered clear. So I used to try and define myself by way of opportunistic methods, but I stopped by the time I was a Sophomore in high school. Anyway, good chapter, and I hope that you don't suffer any writer's block and have a good time. |
Mr. Haziq chapter 6 . 1/19/2017 Answer of the Chapter: Yup. |
Mingyu chapter 6 . 1/18/2017 *snerk* I like what you did with the "Next Chapter" title! As well as the bonds forming here. I know Ikutsuki is trying to break down Minato, but those questions are really things that should be asked for him to grow. For me, I usually define myself by my love for stories. I can get pretty wrapped up in them...that doesn't really go anywhere though. If I'm isolated like that, I can't actually define myself to others. Besides, gotta come out to earn money to live at least. _ Thanks for the chapter! |
Blue Cipher chapter 6 . 1/18/2017 I couldn't say that I am satisfied with it. But nonetheless, it always making me to crave for more. And I agree what the guest review had said. You really do need to pick up the pace because we ain't never getting older... lol Question of the Chapter: Have you ever tried to define yourself by using one trait, one aspect of your character? Answer: It really depends on occasion and the people I am with. I could be jerk, kind, smart. And LAZY. Well... laziness is really the best way to describe me you know. |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/7/2017 Mate, I don't mean to rush you, but if you want to get this out faster than the first one you'll need to pick up the pace. |
justafan chapter 2 . 12/18/2016 you monster i want my yandere labrys chan back please also harem since minato definitely needs all the love and support we can give him plus since he is a persona any kids he has are basically gods if you think about it imagine messiah god haha. |
Mingyu chapter 5 . 12/7/2016 Aww. Labrys dropped the act too soon! Oh well. I liked the inclusion of Sho here. And that Minato was able to get out of his funk. No jokes ready made, just a general idea to use the skill/spell names as puns. Like Maragi can be heard as "my rag" (or something) if you look at it funny. Beyond that, I'm a humorless bum. Thanks for the chapter! |
Mr. Haziq chapter 5 . 12/6/2016 Answer of the Chapter: Marie is so hot, she has the face of a goddess. |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/6/2016 I Nyx'd out on puns during this chapter. |
AtlusisthehomeofOPs chapter 5 . 12/6/2016 AT LAST! SO WHEN IS THE NEXT UPDATE? |
AGuyPassingBy chapter 5 . 12/6/2016 Hello again, just another guy passing by here. I don't think that I put up a review for last chapter, so sorry about that. But all in all, for both this and last chapter, I like the fact that there's (at least what feels like) more world building, making the scope of the entire story feel much larger and more immersive than the first version. I guess that the only thing that felt a little odd at first was the brief bout of roboticism that Minato had after the end of Chapter 4(I think, been a while) where he fails to stop what will become Strega having a surprisingly quick resolution in the following chapter. It makes sense to me because Minato was originally and still is human, but it's still a bit different than expected. Honestly, I was starting to wonder if this would go in a totally different direction than the original where Minato would literally turn into Aigis from the first half of the game, but I'm glad that he springed up quickly, overall. Anyway, another good read, and maybe just have your beta do an additional spot check ever once in a while (Beginning of SWS, "he grabbed his book and ""through"" it at the wall he faced" (threw)) |
KazuSakai chapter 5 . 12/6/2016 Is purse-owner a dead pun already? |
EternalCombOver chapter 4 . 10/19/2016 This might be called a rewrite of the original, but it feels more like an alternative take on the original premise than anything else. Regardelss, that breathes the air of new content into the mix, which can be a hit or miss. The much, much earlier implentation of major characters into the story, even if they are to disappear for some time, sets this one apart from the original. Whether that's good or bad has yet to be seen. As for the writing itself, there's been a strange trade-off. While the wit and characterization have certainly been taken up a notch, the actual combat and description of location seem to have dropped down some. Obviously, there haven't been any 'important' battles as of yet, the way combat plays out seems just a bit lacking in detail, most notably in the final fight of this chapter. I'm sure there's some odd reasoning behind why that particular battle, which seems like it should be the first major clash in the story, is more or less glossed over, but I do hope that the battle quality improves. The newer, more childish personality of the protagonist is both fitting and somewhat off-putting if, like me, this is not the first time encountering this scenario. Admittedly, it could be bias towards the simply brash yet noble protagonist of the original speaking, but the immaturity just doesn't feel right at times. However, since this story spans quite the timeframe, I'm sure there's a lot of room to either find a way to put the protag back to his old self or, if you really are going with this being an alternative take on the story (which I totally don't mind btw), he'll become something else entirely. Looking forwards to seeing where this goes. Also loving the peeks into Aigis' now extrapolated history (if I recall, that isn't really mentioned in the original). |
DPSS chapter 4 . 10/18/2016 I'll admit, I don't like it. I understand the need to make sure Minato isn't too powerful by the time the main story arc comes along. I just think that THIS, is the wrong way to do it. |