|Reviews for Tending to the Soul|
| redandready45 chapter 2 . 9/9
I love these alt-Jaune stories where he takes on a normal civilian career. It is cool to see a non-Huntsman character who nevertheless makes an impact on others.
| Nihatclodra chapter 30 . 9/7
The story ending here makes it feel really incomplete...
| Suicidal Nobody chapter 30 . 9/4
The first 2/3rds of the story felt really good to read and I liked it a lot but after that it seemed kinda rushed out and like it lost its direction but all in all it was still great.
Wish there was a part with his real family though ;)
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 30 . 8/25
So glad that i found this today, what an amazing and satisfying. Your grammar and writing style were on point. The plot, while simple, was very engaging because we got to see our favorite characters in a relaxing yet intimate environment that we usually don't see them in. And Jaune's emotional progression throughout the story was very well handled. Honestly kinda blown away you wrote this as a 19/20 year old, it defintely shows maturity beyond your age.
Obviously a little disappointed that you chose to end it kind of abruptly, but life is life. If you're busy and can't write, then no point forcing yourself and getting upset that you aren't hitting your goals regarding posting schedules. And im glad you decided to give us a kinda open ending instead of dropping it. Would i have loved to know what happened with Cinder and Salem? Yes. With Weiss? Sure. But defintely not going to complain seeing as the rest of the 29 chapters were excellent.
Thanks for writing!
| MasterBrattan chapter 22 . 8/10
I bet Neo specializes in low blows; she lacks the height for anything else.
| MasterBrattan chapter 9 . 8/10
I saw the title and my first thought was 'oh dear'.
| dippytrippy122 chapter 30 . 7/29
My eyes watered way too damn much during this story. Brilliantly written and gripping. Thank you for this. :)
| Guest chapter 30 . 5/19
That ending was super unsatisfying.
There is no resolution to the Salem situation, even some emotional recovery regarding it, and Cinder is said to be missing and not mentioned again. Like what is that bullshit!? Jaune presumably cares quite a bit about her and knows for fact that Salem wasn't happy with what she did, but does nothing. Not even asking Goodwitch to look out for her. When Port was leading Jaune in Vale I almost got excited, I thought we were gonna find Cinder's corpse, I thought we were gonna tie up that loose end. Obviously I realise that leaving it open ended was intentional, be that to leave the reader wondering or to set up a sequel, but still.
And dont get me started on the family survives crap, which was incredibly obvious the moment you deliberately drew attention to the fact that Jaune only saw three of his sisters in the afterlife. The death of his family is still tragic and his suffering is still justified, but having part of his family survive just makes it feel all so... Pointless, like it invalidates his suffering despite what I just said.
I liked the story but... That ending. Like, really!? That's the bullshit your gonna leave the reader!? That's what you wanted to be the final taste left in our mouth!?
Refuses to make an account
| CrazyLich79 chapter 30 . 5/15
The ending is a bit unsatisfying but all good things must come to an end.
Anyways, thanks for writing this.
| CrazyLich79 chapter 25 . 5/14
You sadistic bastard. Least offensive word I could think of, sorry my vocabulary in English is limited. Thanks for the chapter
| CrazyLich79 chapter 19 . 5/14
Thanks for the chapter
| CrazyLich79 chapter 17 . 5/14
Thanks for the chapter.
| CrazyLich79 chapter 14 . 5/14
Thanks for the chapter. Thanks for the chapter.r
| CrazyLich79 chapter 13 . 5/14
Thanks for the chapter.
| CrazyLich79 chapter 12 . 5/14
Thamks for the chapter.