Nothing like some self-destruction to really tug on the heartstrings

This is like my third reread of this fic and im always blown away by how well alcoholism is portrayed. Jaune relapses easy because its fucking HARD to quit. It’s always a visible struggle and it never leaves him alone. Whats the harm?

I feel like ending on a "I will be fine" when we've already seen him relapse after being determined to make a change kind of rings hollow to an extent. I mean even in this chapter we saw him try to cling to old habits of burying everything until Yang managed to out-stubborn him. Still, if you're not sure you're able to continue the story, I can at least respect the decision to give out an open-ended ending instead of just letting it peter out and dangle on a cliffhanger forever.

You fucking muppet why the fuck did you end there you stupid fuck?

So he's gonna be . ore background in terms of people with impact. That's good for his mental health I guess.

That was so... good! God damn, 10/10!

i crieddd

Augh. Such an open ended ending for sure. It was a good place to end it though.
I've enjoyed every chapter of this, from the highs to the lows Jaune encountered. The safety and the dangers he's felt. I'm glad I was able to read this even if only years later. Thank you for this fic!

Not only do you end it on a cliffhanger like that, but you also make that cliffhanger on the chapter before last. You know how to tug on your reader's heartstrings. XD

Interesting...

A very interesting take on Aura! It's not my most favorite, but it's definitely a favorite now! Lends to the mysticism surrounding the strange goings on of Remnant.

The Grimm always screw everything up! Dx

Glynda has already practically adopted the lad. Making it official would only take a step.

Fuck. Fuck, that...that hit hard...

Oh boy...
Jaune, Jaune, Jaune...

Still enjoying the story!

Heh. Bartender Jaune has a way of worming through even the toughest steel.