Inoichi comes off as a really human jerk. I like it.

omg omg omg I havent checked this in months and you updated? I feel my life force restored thank ypu

My mind during this whole thing: *CONFUSED THRILLED SCREAMING*
This is one of my top 5 favorite naruto fics EVER! I read it before but just a day ago i decided to binge it again when i saw that you updated recently :D
Oh boy was i so f*ing happy to see this fic agaaaaiin. Keep doing what you're doing and as much as i ADORE this fic i still would like for you to look after your health ok? Great! See you in the next chapter author-san!

Seen that it was updated and just had to reread it all over again! -I fell back in love with the story all over again- Pleaseeee keep writing! TT I beg of you!

I want to see nanami kick the Yamanaka OUT! His chakra is IN her, she should be able to feel it now, she needs to grab hold! I feel violated and so angry at Kohona on her behalf. Hopefully with Sasuke there she would have a clearer mind before he actually sees something classified.

Gurrrr! I’m so mad at kohona, I hope she doesn’t bow to their wishes when she wakes.

On another note...where is Deidara? He left after Tobi so he should have made it by now. Speaking of Tobi, did he see her get captured? And let it happen?

Would love to see more possibilities with her Kekkai Genkai, love what you did with Tobi’s phasing and Sharingan use!

Would also like to see nanami put the fear of god in them! I don’t want her to have to be rescued, she’d probably think they’d be angry! If anything, use Sasuke or another ninja (like sai) to help her escape.

One thing I don’t like, is how she’s not telling them about their deaths, unless it’s right before she leaves them. Like Sasori, then like how she told hidan. To me, it feels like she’s going to let it happen with her talks of enjoying what time they have left, letting Itachi ‘need’ Sasuke to kill him, and saying there’s nothing she can do. She can take that fatal hit for Kakuzu if needed (and actually survive if you need, because of her blood-limit: the Rasenshuriken rips chakra apart, it being wind natured can ‘swish’ someone chakra this way and that—forcefully, as if chakra was a physical thing in the wind, or a tornado. I’d be cool if nanami could touch it and do a big NOPE—like she did with Tobi—and Control it enough to force the unconnected-to-its-weirder chakra(which means he no longer has any control over over the Jutsu) to force its cutting nature to be harmless, dull, breeze like. Though this probably wouldn’t be a first time try thing, she’d need to train, like Echo-sama told Itachi to do! Anyways it should be enough time before Naruto actually learns the move.) I don’t hate the dark parts in the story i just want enough character development for nanami so she can FIGHT for her brothers survival. I don’t want her to loose them either, cuz u hit me in the feels with her relationships with them, it’s so cute and she has such a big heart...I don’t want them to die, so I want nanami to FIGHT to keep them alive. If that means killing some kohona nin or if it means messing up the true meanings of Akatsuki’s plans and making the leaders order everyone to kill her-then so be it. If she has to tell the right people in kohona about Zetsu’s plans and how her brothers were tricked and aren’t as bad as they thought-then so be it. I just want her to stop the dread in her belly when she knows her time is running out, DO SOMETHING—something CRAZY!

I read this story awhile ago and found it again and am now all caught up, I really do love this story. It’s unique and different from the normal reincarnation, and I really love the creativity shown here. It’s story’s like this one that makes me fall in love with fanfiction all over again. So Thank you so much for writing it! It only furthers my own urge to write my own one day. How do you do it? How do you sort out your thoughts into an meaningful flow of story? Keep people in character? Know what to make each person say, and make it feel as if they would actually say it in canon? Know what happens next? Throw us for plot twists and be three steps ahead?

How do you make this feel so real?

—Dog

Out of everything that happened in this chapter the one thing that rings to me is the fact that Sasuke threw Orochimaru’s head In the fire! I was hoping nanami gave his head to Kakuzu! He wanted a bounty and he could have this one!

—Dog

Just reread it all, and gosh this story is amazing

eagerly awaiting the next update! one of the best fics i've read so far!

OH MY GOSH THIS CHAPTER IS SO GOOD LIKE SASUKE AND NANAMI’S RELATIONSHIP IS LIKE MY GUILTY PLEASURE AT THIS POINT CAUSE I LIKE HOW HELPFUL HE IS WITH HER EVEN IF ITS NOT ALL WILLING, YA KNOW ?

... *adds to fav list*

What an amazing piece of work. I'm so glad I continued following this. I love how you weaved your words together to bring out the full effect of the message to showcase Nanami's feelings; like a ballad of sorts. Especially in the show of hypocrisy from Inoichi. That really drove me up the wall. Will we see interactions between other members of Team Seven and Nanami soon?

Cute...

Oceans and Raven eyes are cool~

Shit is really going to hit the fan. Well, plz continue! I was so happy you updated, update again soon!

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND I LOVER THIS NEW BUDDING RELATIONSHIP SHE HAS WITH SASUKE. AND IT IS QUITE THE PLOT TWIST THAT INO AND CHOJI HAVE DIED. THAT WILL FOR SURE CHANGE THE OPINIONS OF HOW OTHERS WILL VIEW THEM. SO IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS STORY TO DEVELOP MORE AND MORE AND SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN WITH NANAMI, SASUKE, AND THE AKATSUKI! LOVE THIS