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![]() ![]() ![]() Prompt wise... Itachi sasuke and nanmi in a cabin? In thr middle of nowhere? These dont build on your plot but I def want to see them. More semipeaceful akastuki. Obito bonding. Inoichi dead or suicidal bc ino is all he had left. Less intense fluff (cause I live for the plot and the mood is just as intense as the tone and how the characters feel but I'm a couch potato living vicariously through her and I'm exhausted- but maybe thats just thr effect of phenomenal writing) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm high key fine with inoichi dying and tsunafe getting nothing but that's unlikely... Ew konoha. My opinions are the mcs opinions and i feel Nanami. So worried about hidan and Kakuzu. I feel like you have a really good grip on canon kakashi instead of canon, which is really exciting to see, and I love how her bond with sasuke is developing... But konoha is giving me hives ngl. I realized this isnt going to be perfectly happy (sasori is alive in my mind bc denial ain't leaving) but all that means is a fanfic that's canon offshoot as far as I'm concerned- something that deserves its own fanfics so the characters are happy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome to the beginning of the destruction of Cannon. BUT WHY DID sasori have to die first? Im grieving ahhh. I'm literally still in denial and 110% at 'he'll just be edo tenseied. It'll be fineeee' |
![]() ![]() ![]() As I read this story, I remembered after nearly 10 chapters that I already read it a couple of years ago. Don't know why I didn't keep reading it! I had such a great time. Nanami is a fascinating character, full of love and obsession for her "Red Clouds". I know you haven't updated for nearly 2 years but one may hope! |