Reviews for Choices
FinnMac chapter 2 . 6/30
He took that well. So far.
FinnMac chapter 1 . 6/30
But not too happy.
tff000 chapter 27 . 6/7
good
VeThena chapter 4 . 6/6
The diner?!
And yet they are worried about word spreading fast...

Still struggling with the lack of depth (or maybe it's maturity) coming through the chapters so far.
VeThena chapter 2 . 6/6
Ah, that was a bit anticlimactic... The narration lacked the depth that was needed considering a bombshell is being laid in front of Edward. It feels rushed and Edward reacted like he deals with this type of bomb everyday. Also, considering it is fiction a little bit of drama would have been nice.
But let me continue. I'm curious to see how Edward will deal with being a sudden father while he has a girlfriend who is supposed to be his future.
tff000 chapter 26 . 6/5
good )
tff000 chapter 25 . 6/5
good chap
tff000 chapter 24 . 6/5
good ch.
tff000 chapter 23 . 6/5
good
tff000 chapter 22 . 6/4
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tff000 chapter 21 . 6/4
good
:)
tff000 chapter 20 . 6/4
can't wait to find out what happened
tff000 chapter 19 . 6/4
poor e
tff000 chapter 18 . 6/4
glad e is standing up for himself
tff000 chapter 17 . 6/4
good chapter.
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