Reviews for Family Portrait
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
I liked the ending, you need to work on your flow a bit but otherwise it was good
CodyRhodesFan chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
OH YAY. VIOLENCE, INCEST AND RAPE. 3 *heart bursts into happiness* OH YAY.

He wrote a poem?

Worthless? Oh no, Draco, just fun to torture you.

His voice could barely be heard oh yay...*Is so happy because she enjoys Draco-rape* :D

Even though I'm quite used to Draco being hurt by his Father rather than Mother I STILL LIKE THIS. _

TORTURE. OH YAY. IMSOHAPPY. _

POEM. WORTHLESS. D: YAYRAPETORUTRESTUFFZ*dies*

He's gonna kill himself? OHYAY.

the ending...his insanity...awe. I love it. : I'M A HAPPY PERSON. *dies again*
Em chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Eh, the idea is good, but the actual technicalities of writing (your writing skills) need some work.

Get a beta.
Lexie BeautyKiller chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Crying. The Best Ever.
jasrey chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
I don't really like the fact that the Malfoy's had a gun in their house (that didn't make sense) but there could have been more going on in this.
bitebleedsuckfuck chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
omg this story is so...

i really cant describe it, well done.

i thought he would have commited suicide tho.
Moon Crescent Neko chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Good story! Is there another chap? It seemed kind of finished but kind of not. Hope you update soon if there is another chap!
FinnTurner chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
The plot line was very good, except that it was a bit choppy. Also, the decoration between the paragraphs is a bit distracting. Also, Draco's diary passage (and poem) should be italicized. It needs to be a bit fleshed out more, but otherwise, it's the start of something that could be very good. :)
ALoversDream chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
Oh my god! I'm crying right now! that was good, it really was, but sad. I'm literally bawling!
Erae chapter 1 . 1/1/2004
AW! That was so sad! Poor Draco!
Nisha Kole chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
OOh... the angst! I really like the idea of Narcissa being evil for once. It seems like every time you read her, she's not so bad, and just stands around crying when Lucius is terrible to Draco. It's refreshing to hear her calling the shots! Anyway, great fic! Keep up the good work! As always, Nisha Kole
Space Panda chapter 1 . 7/25/2003
*reads*...sniff...WAH! That was beautiful! Continue!
CydCharisse chapter 1 . 7/4/2003
I like it a lot. I like how the picture ties in with everything. _
Golden Oruha chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
It's cool. And I like. and I like the way Narcissa controls the household
godsavetheminority chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
This is VERY good. Will there be more?
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