Reviews for Talia Xanatos
rbrooks25 chapter 33 . 5/30/2018
Lady Earth may cause some issues. :) I was curious, what happened to Demona in this world? Is she dead or just missing?
rbrooks25 chapter 32 . 5/30/2018
This is a good chapter. I posted the critique I have on the last chapter, but the most important part of any story is here. The story is intriguing and holds the interest of the reader. :)
rbrooks25 chapter 31 . 5/30/2018
The only thing that I would change is the Elisa and Goliath parts. I've never been a fan of that pairing. It's a good story that seems to flow well, but if I may make a recommendation. I've been thinking about this for awhile, but I don't think you need to include the POV's. If you seperate the paragraph's I believe that the reader can better ascertain what is going on with descriptions. It's just a thought. Overall, the story is unique and very interesting and I can overlook the Elisa and Goliath relationship which is the first time I have read a story with that pairing :) Great work on this!
SuperSOULEATERLOVER chapter 17 . 11/17/2016
Author of the Insane chapter 10 . 10/20/2016
Wow... Okay, that I did NOT see coming
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Update immediately, please!
Author of the Insane chapter 9 . 10/16/2016
Halfling. Very nice touch
Author of the Insane chapter 3 . 10/4/2016
now I am getting curious. keep it up
Author of the Insane chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
I am loving this story. glad my own could inspire you. can't wait to see more