This remains one of my favourite stories, even if it is unfinished. The characterization, the pacing, the writing in general... absolutely enthralling! You’re a phenomenal writer and I’m so glad this story exists!

うそ。なんで？

Oh god. OK so I just realized this hasn't been updated since 2003 so there's like 0 chance you're ever going to read this but I'll say it anyway. This fanfiction is wonderful and I love the concept. I hope at some point you'll update!

DAMMIT NOOOOOOOO WHYYYYYYYY! D,:
WAT THE F****** HAPPENS NEXT TELL ME PLZ! *falls down crying * why u do this to me ;-;
Well, u hope you'll update someday. Soon enough ;;

*throws hands in air* i knew it, i knew it! Ever since Sesshomaru sort of mentioned it, i knew it. *-*
Dang though. Damn. OmO

Oh no. This feels like as if he's this close ** ** to turning demon. Oh no *clicks to read more* OmO

Awww :3 so kawaii. Sooner or later though, that conversation was bound to happen. XD

that was reaaallyy good ... its too bad its not finished

Nuuuu! *immediately clicks next page* :)

I am so intrigued that I'm not quite sure what to Make of it. Wow.

Aww, invisible inukag fluff! XD I like the way you portrayed Sessho-chan, though. It was really good. :3

How did he know?

Haha! Incredulous much? XD
This sounds so interesting. Ima read more now. :P

Ooooh,! I like it! :D

You know, I always hated Shippo, and now I hate him even more! I mean, did anyone else noticed throughout the anime that he is not only mostly useless, but there are times in which he ACTUALLY sabotages the whole group?

Sure, I do give credit where credit is due. He DOES help sometimes... But if they're going to keep an adorable character just because he's adorable - I don't even think he's that adorable, truthfully, and I'm a lady -, then keep Kirara! Give her the spotlight! Is there something more freaking adorable than the sound she makes? Plus, she's also helpful. I, personally, would love to have a tiny cat who could transform into a dire flying fire-cat. But trust me when I say this, just her tiny cat form would be enough to enchant me, and I don't even like cats! I'm a dog person.

I think what happened was the author of Inuyasha couldn't afford to proceed with the story without a character with such profile in play. Sango and Kirara appear just way later on, and without that hindrance of a fox, Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship would progress without interference - which is something the fans would enjoy, but it would mean that the emotion that comes with the uncertain would die out way too soon.

Let's admit, the japanese only a sort of innocent romance. It's either one - emotion uncertainty until both parties admit their feeling quite at the end of the series, and the true relationship begins in an unfathomable post-ending that inspires many fanfics -, or the other - there's no emotion connection what-so-ever, but a considerable amount of groping. Which is fine, it's cultural. But I'm brazilian. My culture speaks heat, passion. Even my particular self, which diverges from most warm-like behavior, prefers my adored characters sharing such kisses - as above -, consoling each other with hugs, caressing each other's faces when they display sadness and woe... I'm not crazy, right? That is more interesting, I'm assuming? Well, maybe it's just my cultural thing...