This is really good so far; I'm impressed! (Even if I hate Hakuba, this is an interesting story.) Keep up the great work!

I almost screamed when i saw you updated, I love it so much! I'll be waiting for the next update! :)

Pfft, I love this. I love the unique idea, and really does make me smile. I am excited to see where your leading the story!
Keep it up! Thank you!

an idea for you, they accidentally took someone else with them and that person is after them

I love this so much! Hope you can update soon!

...Great holy of Ra! They don't know what a shower is!? How do they even survive at their time? *face-palm*
Great story so far! Keep it up! I really want to see some lovey-dovey moments here! Yahoo~! But I prefer that it's between Kaito and Shinichi (KAISHIN FOR LIFE!) Thank you and please update soon!

Haha I like the "what is a shower?" XD good way to end the chapter~
I liked the whole chapter too, obviously - (not just the ending XD) poor Shin-chan being assaulted by Kaito XD but I like it x))
I'm looking forward to the next chaps! :D

that is good. update soon please.

"cute", hehe :3
I liked this chapter! It's fun to see Hattori and Hakuba discovering the new things! and now Shin-chan is gonna take care of 'em! But where'd Kaito go? ;_; he's gonna miss Shin-chan :o

looking forward for the cont

Okay, you have my attention. I'd really like to see more of this story, whenever you feel like continuing it.