Reviews for Second Time's The Charm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() About time, please let something change. Also Naruto is acting like a bitch in this chapter but whatever I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story but you are really trying hard to make everything adhere to canon. I hope this won't be the case for the rest of the story or i'll probably drop it soon. Shes a former hokage, she definitely should've have changed something significant by now. |
![]() ![]() Now am I uncertain if it's naruto bashing fucking sakura manage to break that jutsu but naruto who had experience on preventing a big fox from taking over his mind won't be able to break it and not talking about unlocking yami naruto |
![]() ![]() I like your fic but why the fuck you ruining naruto moment I get it he is closer to canon but why the hell you ruining his moments I can understand saving iruka part but on wave his kyubi moment and with haku in forest of death saving sasuke and in chunin exam with neji it's like taking all his good things and giving it to mc so she can shine and we get the annoying naruto and why the fuck he is like canon without jutsu when sasukra is getting them but he can't even get one when kakashi doesn't have to focus on sasuke |
![]() ![]() I know know where that shikanoko came from |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope one day ypu could find a time to continue this story. this is such a gem, it would be unfortunate if this was left unfinished |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would say this is the perfect Alternative Universe for Naruto... the canons were not out of characters... it was just simply the plot if someone took a different courses |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY YOU GAVE NARUTO AND SHIKAMARU THE FAN'S VERSION OF THEIR OUTFIT |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was laughing one second and bawling my eyes out the next |
![]() ![]() ![]() my mood changed so fast |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Shikaku. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am glad that everyone is safe. But looks like everyone else is still in danger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How many uchiha's taken the life's of Senju down to women, men, children and Tobirama lost most of his family to uchiha's Why don't uchiha's take responsibility of their actions?. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love. It. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank god that everyone is alive. |