| Reviews for Second Time's The Charm |
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   4everfictional chapter 3 . 3/7/2019 Oh! She identifies as a girl then? Good to know. For future reference, is she gender fluid or trans? Still, I really hope she’s able to dress the way that makes her feel comfortable in the future (her mom pushing all this cis stuff on her is really not cool. She’s her own person and should feel safe expressing herself/like she won’t be disappointing someone by doing so). Great chapter! XD |
| 4everfictional chapter 2 . 3/7/2019 That’s awful! I hope he’s not stuck in a female body for too long and has an easy transition. |
| 4everfictional chapter 1 . 3/6/2019 That’s one way to do it. ;) Love the chapter! XD |
| Asuka1920 chapter 42 . 2/27/2019 Love reading this! Can’t wait to read more! |
| Annedq chapter 1 . 2/14/2019 I miss youuuu |
| Enderheart5911 chapter 42 . 2/1/2019 *screams into pillow* this is just... so good. |
| InfinityMask chapter 27 . 1/19/2019 Why everyone seems forgetting that the war happened in suna not konoha... |
| InfinityMask chapter 24 . 1/19/2019 What I never understand is why she never ask Hiruzen for any information. It's just kinda stupid and lazy. Hiruzen can write any impression things that Tobi need to know and leave it at some place... |
| UntiedHeartbeat chapter 8 . 1/13/2019 This was so unlike him but too sweet. |
| QuirkCirc chapter 35 . 1/11/2019 I freaking love this fic. Like more than life itself. More than Naruto loves ramen. Or at least closenough, that is. No one can match Naruto’s dedication to the ramen gods than maybe Kushina |
| QuirkCirc chapter 22 . 1/10/2019 Fuck yes! |
| QuirkCirc chapter 20 . 1/10/2019 I ‘be been wondering about the edo Tensei as well and gosh I think I’d die laughing if Tobi cheered over having his old body back xD |
| JManM chapter 16 . 1/6/2019 The Haku Zabuza thing wasn't super. Kanoko should be pissed because Naruto chose the lives of Haku and Zabuza over team 7. |
| JManM chapter 12 . 1/6/2019 Endorsed. The grammatical errors are two few to ruin your fun writing. |
| The Zelos Wilder chapter 42 . 1/4/2019 Damn it! Tobirama’s out again! Anyways, just binged this fic, and I must say, this was pretty good. I wasn’t a fan of the ‘Tobirama is a girl now’ thing, but I decided to read it later on. I’m glad I did. My one and only thing that I have to say is I’d like Tobi to have a true badass moment. He had it at the final valley but the plot for the retrieval arc, thankfully original, didn’t feel that authentic. Maybe if we had more context to that Yamanaka, it wouldn’t have felt so strange(?). Anyways, I think you do best when writing original content, not following canon. Like this mission. It was hype because the mission was nothing like this in canon, and there were unknown factors to deal with. If possible, I’d like to see more Taijutsu as well. It’s probably not easy to write, but it’s so good lol. I appreciate the effort you put into this fic. I look forward to the next chapter. |