After reading this story, I must say that it’s amazing.

Absolutely. Amazing.

At first your spelling and grammar wasn’t the best but you still had a story that just sucked in people regardless of the little errors. As the story went on the plot got thicker and thicker and we got to see many interesting things. I’m actually very glad that you kept Tobirama in-character and didn’t change his personality but only his relationships with other characters. You have a very good balance of humor, drama, suspense and tradegy which makes reader feel the feelings of the character through your writing. And the fact that there are so many enemies lurking around is also something that causes suspense. Especially some of them know of the true identity of ’Kanoko’.

All in all, this is a great story and you should be proud of it.

P.S. When are you planning to update chapter 43? ‘Cause I’m very interested in finally seeing Obito/Tobi.

I must

I've been reading this nonstop and just took a break to review! I love this book and Konoko's story. I love her scenes with Shikamaru. oh, and I can't wait for the Edo Tensai scene

THANK YOU FOR YOUR EF(FORTS AUTHOR-SAMA! *HUGS TIGHTLY* I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR FUTURE WORKS

Will Kanoko end up with Sasuke?
I kinda want them to. Don't get me wrong, imagining Tobirama with an Uchiha (an Izuna look alike at that) is extremely difficult to process, it simply doesn't fit.
But, on the other hand. Kanoko as Kanoko? I ship it~

Great job

Apparently Itachi can genjutsu an extremely powerful sensor without the use of his Sharingan. Neat.

Holy shit, these ninja are a bunch of toddlers mid-tantrum. Screaming, crying and banging their fists on the ground in the middle of nowhere when they have no idea what the fuck is happening. It's a wonder any of them survived. Oh wait, the plot exists.

I'm excited to know what's next! Your story is amazing. Although there are some spelling errors and what-not, but the plot is good. I don't remember reading a reincarnation fic like this, and I'm glad that I read yours.

Tobirama is perceived to be all too powerful but like any other hokage he has flaws too, and I like how you put that in this story. The character development was good too. I like how Shikamaru turned out. I was kinda scared that he'd be too envious of his sister, and then that would be the point of all of this, but I was glad he was not swayed. Also, sealing and Shikamaru together? Awesome.

With regards to the previous chapters, I was actually glad that Kanoko was invalid (?lol sorry) because we got to see Naruto and the others fight. Lee and Sakura's fight against Deidara was something I wish that I actually saw because I think their fight was epic haha. Actually, all the fights were great in my opinion. I'm wondering, is Sai going too show up soon?

And lastly, I've made it this far in this fic but I think that the major enemy or issue in this story is yet to be revealed and I'm waiting for that. Thus, sorry for rambling, I hope you are well, and please update soon!

this is one of the most boring and stupid naruto story ive ever read

senju tobirama staring in highschool drama without skills or chakra and nothing groundbreaking will happen. why woukd you write about naruto verse based on this...

sex changes just dont work for me, there is just something seriously wrong with that. is if supposed to be funny? a man parading as a women. why even touch a subject like what makes the soul male or female experience or predeterment. no just no its a subject ppl should stay away from unless its a crack fic

Awesome

Note to Tsunade: Your "commitment to the village" wavered so much, you left it. And "should your actions ever place the leaf in danger" says the person, that in another timeframe w/o the interference/swaying of Naruto probably would've healed OROCHIMARU's arms. The arms that her sensei died to seal off.

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Hypocrisy at it's finest.

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Great fic by the way!

This story keeps getting better! At first it relied heavily on humour and Tobirama seemed a bit ooc at times. But then chapter 15(16) happened, and suddenly there was a plot! :D And I must admit that I was a bit disappointed when the twins suddenly shared their pain because for me it came out of nowhere and was so cliche... But then the story focused more on their relationship and it was fleshed out and it fit better. And the plot grew more and more and your writing improved and slowly I was completely sucked into this compelling story. I especially love the interactions between all the characters and the humour which leaks here and there and breaks the tension. Thank you so much for creating this!