| Reviews for Second Time's The Charm |
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  Cap chapter 42 . 8/26/2018 I really enjoyed this. I hope you continue it. |
 MikazukiSuzuki chapter 42 . 8/10/2018 Please update soon |
| Stolid-Scholar chapter 7 . 8/6/2018 Yeah okay I'm done, Shikamaru is blackmailing his sister when she is clearly having a hard time? And doing it by threatening to accuse her of bullying her actual bully (sorry, being mean to someone once does not give them carte blanche to make your life hell)? Also maybe you could work on your grammar a bit. English may not be your first language, but you're choosing to write it in a place where you (presumably) want other people to read it, so a bit of extra effort is warranted. |
| Stolid-Scholar chapter 6 . 8/6/2018 I can't really believe the second hokage would be this pathetic. I also kind of refuse to believe Shikamaru would just let his sister get bullied? Will give this a couple more chapters I guess... |
| Clumsy Psychopath chapter 7 . 7/17/2018 huh... to think I defended you... |
| Clumsy Psychopath chapter 1 . 7/17/2018 to the guest below: although Ive not read the story, wellll... the third grew up to be more powerful than tobirama, orichamaru sarutobi.. n Itachi orichamaru.. ergo Itachi tobirama.. I can see where the writer is coming from.. n although the second was really really powerful, the majority of his prowess came from his exceptional mind. although not a weak fighter (kumo nins killed him, in perspective with other hokages; first defeated madara n Kurama , third led konoha through 2 wars n raised the sannins, forth was ranked flight on sight not to mention he summoned the frikin shinigami; u get it ?) he was more of a tactician.. now.. I'm gonna give this doc a go.. n hope it's as good as the summery claims it to be... |
| Guest chapter 41 . 7/10/2018 itachi wanking. Thinking Tobirama (who fought Madara) will lose to itachi. Only a deranged fanGIRL can write something like this |
| chibi-Clar chapter 42 . 5/23/2018 Fricken amazing! |
| chibi-Clar chapter 41 . 5/23/2018 Awesome! |
| chibi-Clar chapter 40 . 5/23/2018 Wow! I totally like how there’s like still unsaid changes that are going on and are being revelealed slowly to shikamaru :) |
| chibi-Clar chapter 39 . 5/23/2018 Hmmm... I was sorta expecting somthing between neji and her... lol |
| Sytry's-cauldron chapter 42 . 5/23/2018 I love this story so much! I love how Kanoko isn't just Tobirama reincarnated, she's fleshed out a lot more as the story progresses! Keep up the good work! |
| chibi-Clar chapter 38 . 5/22/2018 Omg! Shikamaru is now there to glare at all the guys lol! |
| chibi-Clar chapter 37 . 5/22/2018 I wanna read about the talk lol |
| chibi-Clar chapter 36 . 5/22/2018 YES! |