Reviews for Second Time's The Charm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, you write a masterpiece, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update:3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Updated. Nice. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() Nailed Tobirama in the first part, hell nailed Tobirama period |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I hope she looses her shit, actually I hope Inoichi goes in her mind and is totally shocked or can’t get in at all. Gonna be crazy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhhh i really cant wait for more now! I'm dying here waitting for the moment someone will just flat discovery and tell the others that she is the second hokage. They have several things pointing too much information that should be out of her hands and Shikaku at least didn't considered the fact that maybe his daughter is not exactly what he think she is. And mindwalk? Best of luck Inoichi, bless your soul because i will just get a popcorn and watch you suffer the consequences of entering her mind. Who knows, maybe you will live. Or maybe you will die along with Chouza and Shikaku for invading her personal space. Those 3 will suffer for sure. But what i really want to know it's Naruto, Tsunade and Shikaku reactions for found out the truth. Most Tsunade, imagine finding out your uncle was reincarnated on a girl body and she is not happy with Konoha high powers now. Guess i will go back to speculations like i was doing since last chapter! Thank you for your hard work, i will be waitting for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh so much happened! We |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what did Sakura whispered to Shikamaru ear's that woke him up really fast? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the chapter. Though, I wish for more Konoko scenes! Also, Is she going to go sage mode? So many possibilities! I want 2 see her beat Itachi. Gah! Cant wait till next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously? If it was that easy, Yamanaka would rule the world long time ago. Memory wipe... You are aware that SKILLS are part of the memory, right? Either way, I'm done. I have no idea how Leaf is still standing when their counter-inteligence department Does. Not. Exist. We have Danzo, Orochimaru, Akatsuki, Cloud and heavens know who else waltz in, do whatever they please and go on their merry way without any punishment. That's not how a shinobi village works. My SOD was blow up so hard that Tsar Bomba looks like firecracker compared to it. Good bye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very few writers ever manage to capture the characters personalities accurately. Somehow you did. All of them behave exactly as they do in the manga. Its quite a feat and one of the things that make this story wonderful. I'm so glad you updated and I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story such an amazing idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Itachi done messed up. Hopefully he doesn’t make other people regret it. |
![]() ![]() ITACHI YOU'RE SUCH A DICK, KANOKO WAS HELPING SASUKE GET THE CLAN BACK IN ORDER AND YOU TRY TO MURDER HER |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I love your writing style! I love how you included naruto a sexy jutsu and the thousand years of pain Lol! And I honestly love Tobirama/kanako as a narrator. I love how you change things up too. Hope he tells tsunade that he is her great uncle later on. |