The story that you wrote and put different characters in it, made me cry tears of joy and how you did it though, is unbelievable. And the story of Moses in the book Exodus from The Holy Bible, that is what I call life changing. Keep up the good work.

Listing to me please, I'm Jewish, I live in Israel and I don't believe in God but out of respect to those who do (such as my grandmother) I usually refrain from saying Elohim and instead use either hai as in the Hebrew letter and the first letter in God's name or hashem which is basically like "he who must not be named" as the name is seen as holy and as such is not to be tainted by human voice.

I'm sorry if I'm being a pain in the ass it's just that this kind of thing is really important to me, and I only ask that you try and take this into consideration.

My sincere apologies if I'm being a pain, and thanks for reading this to the end.

Love it so much from sttart to end

A great ending, I love it.

The might be free of Egypt, but sooner or later new problems are going to come up.

(But for now, they can savor their victory.)

What an amazing way to end this story!

:)

Amazing chapter :)

That part always make me feel happy yet tears dropping

Chapter 12 gave me the chills but both chapters are really good

Love it

We haven't seen the last of Dan-not yet at least.

you know you should start the sqeual of the prince of egypt as in joseph the king of dream Because of else movie where my fovarite as a kid ,

Great chapter. Next comes the plague that kills Dan's son.

This Will get a little sad great story

Dan is about to pay the price for his stubbornness...