For the author, really enjoying the story so far. You can see your passion come out in the characters, and it makes it really hard to put the story down.

For other readers, I can promise that you’ll enjoy the story as far as I’ve read, however do be a little patient. It is a little bumpy with a missed word here or misspelling there, but like I said above to the author, you can very clearly see the passion in the story.

It would be difficult to make carrying a dark mark illegal for a normal person. But it should be possible to make it illegal for anyone in a public office. Would that be good enough for you?

If Voldemort can destroy normal wards in less than 30 seconds, than they are not much use any more. You are down to the Fidelius.

Britpicking:
they are in Scotland, in February. There shouldn't be snow unless they are really high in the mountains. The area has a really oceanic climate. There can be snow even in February, but it should be mentioned as rare, and there should be lots of mud.

Either you and me have totally different ideas what testing means, or the language barrier is hitting. To me the point of testing is to check, what training is necessary, and to adapt or create any training necessary. As Dmbledore isn't training Harry any, there is no point in testing, but torture.

What's wrong with fluff. I like all of your work that I have read so far Sasha

Great story thanks a lot for finishing it..

You really need a Beta, there are so many grammatical errors, wrong and misused words used

There were only 12 muggles killed, add in the supposed death of Pettigrew and you have the total of 13 that is given in canon. Fudge is the Minister for Magic not of magic. You really need a beta to fix all the grammatical errors.

I really believe that Harry would get upset with Ron and Hermione, Ron especially, when he kept interrupting when he talked to anyone else. It's highly annoying and quite disrespectful. I just think he would bristle at the constant intrusion.

Harry should kill himself and save the Dark Lord the trouble. Train all year but can't take Umbridge in a 2 on 1 fight? Yep, just reducto your own skull at that point.

Harry should just kill himself and save the Dark Lord the trouble. Train like a dog all year and cant handle Umbridge 2 on 1? Defindo yourself in the temple

Y does hermiony going through a family library? and y does harry talking abt selling books. Can’t Harry do anything without telling his friends. It’s like he cannot function properly without hermiony and Ron. There adults in the picture now there was no need of informing children abt houcruxes too.

There are a lot of unnecessary exclamation points! It's kind of distracting! I think they could be used more sparsely to illustrate a point! Rather than being used for normal dialogue!

Capítulo 17, ahora gran parte de la generación de Harry es testigo de cómo Harry Potter es el niño que vivio dos veces JAJAJAJA