|Reviews for The way I am|
| Visage chapter 1 . 5/9/2003
Such a wonderful story. And how true it is that children do not want to turn into their parents in that type of situation. Awesome job with a touchy subject. (I liked the last line. It broke up the seriousness. Sounded like Reed. _)
| JadziaKathryn chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
This is sad, but well-written. The pineapple part was a great way to wrap it up.
| zealousgirl chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
Very good start. I usually get annoyed with 1st person narratives, but the way you wrote this gave us better insight into how he feels, since Malcolm tends to be introverted.
I am very interested in seeing where you are going to go with this. Given that you are British, you will likely be able to make him sound British. (many do this by throwing in a few Brit idioms such as Bloody and Bloke - I am one of those!)
| Amy Rose chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
Woah, I loved this! This is very good! I don't think this needs another chapter, if that's what's you're thinking. Not much R/S, that's good.