Reviews for Order of Mercy
cmajor268 chapter 56 . 9/16/2018
This was an amazing story from start to finish. Uour writing is impeccable to the point where this kept me up at nightmy mind racing to finish it. I've always been a fan of Bill and Fleur but I absolutely fell in love with Percy and Audrey. I'll be reading the accompanying stories in the coming days.

Cheers!
Istillwishiwasaweasley chapter 56 . 8/26/2018
Excellent story, well done!
Bubulona chapter 3 . 8/18/2018
Great chapter! Their arguing was intense enough that I didn't want to stop reading. All the emotions were there and I want to see how this will play out.
Bubulona chapter 2 . 8/18/2018
I don't think I can put all my thoughts about this chapter in this review but I'm enjoying how you are portraying the characters; from Percy and Bill's interaction at the pub to Percy seeing Fleur through a new lens to Fleur's and Bill's little moments. I feel that people often just focus on Percy's flaws instead of recognizing that he's a Gryffindor, a Weasley, and he does come back at the end. And Bill only gets characterized as the cool older brother but so far your story shows more than that. And I love Fleur because she's just so her and I'm loving how you're portraying her.
Bubulona chapter 1 . 8/18/2018
So glad that I found your fanfic because I have been into a Fleur/Bill and Percy/Audrey mood lately and your story concentrates on them! :) Fleur trying to reassure Tonks was lovely. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
EnglishGrlVerity chapter 56 . 8/6/2018
I laughed! I cried! I loved it!
MelRosk chapter 56 . 7/21/2018
This story was completely and utterly perfect. I have fallen in love with your Percy, and am so thrilled with how you built these backstories right into cannon. I actually went back and reread (ok, listened to the audiobook) for DH before I read this, and am glad I did. This feels like book 7.1 that never got published in the first go around. The story was great, the editing superb. I am so glad that I found this story and that I have gotten to explore the world you have someone who almost exclusively reads harry-centric fics you may have me converted.
Iris394 chapter 56 . 6/1/2018
Honestly this is the best fanfic I have ever read. Thank you so so so so much for writing this
Emcnary chapter 29 . 5/10/2018
Oh. My. Goodness. I knew the truth about why Percy and Penny's relationship ending would be a doozy since it took twenty nine chapters for the truth to come out. Poor Percy...for a man who likes control in all things, this would be the ultimate betrayal for him. Not to mention the loss of a little life that he'd already come to think of as his child. This chapter was raw and emotional for him and so well done. I find myself grieving for him.
And what a revelation for him to realize that Audrey was pushing him away. As prideful and stubborn and tortured as our Percy is, he is quite perceptive.
Well done!
Emcnary chapter 27 . 5/8/2018
I'll have you know that my procrastination has been epic over the past few days while I've put off most things in order to read this fic!
My own story? Readers can surely wait a a few extra days...
Grocery list? I'll just wing it this week...
Laundry? My brood of children don't really need pajamas, do they?
"Order of Mercy" is so good I just can't stop. I love the four person POV switches (I really can't decide which character is my fave to read). And, good gracious, do I have a new love for Percy Weasley! The conflict of his personality and how it fits in with his large overbearing family is so well portrayed.
And I love Bill. That you give him real vulnerability makes his character so much more dimensional and interesting.
Fleur gets a bad wrap a lot of times, but I love how unapologetically French she is in your story, and how intelligent she is (and, good gracious, are her and Bill hot together!).
Audrey is perfect for Percy. He needs someone to shake him up a bit, for sure. They remind me a bit of Ben Stiller and Jennifer Aniston in that movie, "Along Came Polly":) What a great opportunity you've got to use a canon character and really give her a back story and personality. She is a really relatable character with all of her flaws (perceived and otherwise) and the fact that her parents and childhood have really shaped who she is.
I am so sorry that I've not yet reviewed at 27 chapters in, but...I have no excuse...I'll do better:).
piano.writer chapter 56 . 4/21/2018
This is wonderful, I really enjoyed reading it. I just wish you could have included a scene of the rest of the Weasleys finding out what Percy did. I was hoping to see their reactions. Thanks for writing.
mcepl chapter 56 . 4/16/2018
Damn you! I went to sleep at 4 am and now I am completely groggy!

Thank you, very nice story, but for the overindulgence in pornography. This story really does not need, it is good enough to be read even by normal people.
Bluest Witch chapter 56 . 4/12/2018
I discovered your fics after ktoo’s recommendations. I’ve enjoyed this story a lot! Very well written and chaptered. Congratulations!
KH55 chapter 56 . 3/18/2018
Just found and finished this in 3 days. Really like how you fleshed out characters that often don’t get a lot of attention in the books and movies, especially Percy. Very well written and I can’t wait to read some of your other stories.
HPGSRGOT chapter 3 . 12/10/2017
And Here We Go! Onto Chapter 4, cannot wait :)

I love your interactions between husband and wife, it all reads very naturally.
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