Reviews for Order of Mercy
HeartOfAspen chapter 8 . 3/13/2019
Percy at the beginning of this chapter is a MOOD

Also, it was nice to see the order’s first act. I suspect the speculations are correct, and it will never go that smoothly again
LyannaStarkFan chapter 9 . 3/13/2019
The last few chapters have been wonderful. I really enjoyed reading about Percy and Audrey's first date (plus Oliver).

I also enjoyed the insight into the Weasleys' place in pureblood society, the opinions of purebloods besides the Malfoys, based off of Seth's comments about Audrey trying to drive her mother into an early grave/mad. Does that place change after the 2nd war ends, when Kingsley's administration takes power? What is Margaret Sprayberry's opinion of Percy/The Weasleys when Percy and Audrey get married? Does Seth ever warm up to Percy, after Percy and Audrey get married?
HeartOfAspen chapter 7 . 3/12/2019
Catriona is a compelling character- I hope we get to see more of her!
HeartOfAspen chapter 6 . 3/11/2019
I loved the Wood’s reactions to disowning Catriona - especially, as a Puff myself, the shout out to the stubbornness of Hufflepuffs! A bit of Ginny/Fleur bonding was also nice to read.
HeartOfAspen chapter 5 . 3/9/2019
Poor Fleur. Everyone in this story has their demons, and they’re all well earned. You know, I’ve known for a while now that Percy and Oliver would have shared a common room, but I never imagined them as friends. Too fanatic over very different things. But somehow, here, it works.
HeartOfAspen chapter 4 . 3/8/2019
Ahaha that parting line! Wonderful!
HeartOfAspen chapter 3 . 3/8/2019
An excellent chapter, lots of decisions made, and clearly some action about to happen. Well done
HeartOfAspen chapter 2 . 3/7/2019
Adored this insight into Fleur’s mind - also into Percy’s.
HeartOfAspen chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
This story got recommended to me in one of the Facebook groups, and while it is not a pairing I have ever read before, something compelled me to give it a try. After chapter 1, I can see that I’m going to end up reading this thing to the end. I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us.
Arnel 63 chapter 1 . 3/4/2019
I'm glad I waited to read this adventure until I'd read all of your other stories. Pieces are falling into place from other tales and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story arch plays out.

One thing I neglected to say in other reviews is how much I like your Percy. You've made him a very real person for me and I suddenly like him much better than I did. Thank you for that.
LyannaStarkFan chapter 6 . 3/2/2019
I enjoyed meeting all of Audrey's siblings. Her mother seems to have complicated relationships with Sarah and Seth too.

I love the Wood family and how protective they are of Catriona and Campbell.

I enjoyed seeing Ginny and Fleur take tentative steps towards building a relationship.
LyannaStarkFan chapter 3 . 3/1/2019
I decided to reread this story since I didn't review the first time I read it. I like the idea that Percy secretly passed information to the OotP and was in contact with Bill during DH.

The older I get the more sympathetic I am to Percy. I adore the Weasleys, but it is hard to deny that the Weasleys in some ways pushed him away.
Guest chapter 56 . 2/4/2019
I loved your story! I can't wait to read more!
WeasleyCousin chapter 1 . 1/14/2019
Decided it was time for a re-read. The chapter on Platform 9 3/4 gets me every single time. Bawling.
horsebell chapter 56 . 10/28/2018
Beautifully written, would’ve liked more before epilogue though.
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