Reviews for Order of Mercy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m loving Audrey opening up to Percy more. But of course we know the turmoil that leads to. God I’m so much Audrey it hurts! The bit with Bill and Ron was so sweet. I imagine it was never a particularly close relationship with him and Ron. Bill would have been heading to Hogwarts when Ron was around a year or two old. But then roughhousing like brothers is just so perfect because you just imagine how many time Bill and Charlie were told off by Molly for the same thing. The love scene in this chapter is pure perfection. There is nothing better than completely losing yourself in another person. Reckless passion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After many years of absence I have returned to the thing that brings me the most comfort, Harry Potter. And what better fic to return to than this, my favorite never finished story. The beginning of this chapter with Percy and Audrey listening to the Quidditch match was such a sweet little couple moment. It reminds me of watching soccer with my ex. The parallel of Oliver’s rise to the top and my favorite goal keeper in soccer are so similar. My favorite keeper was the third choice for his national team during World Cup qualifying for 2010. But the first choice very sadly committed suicide in November 2009. In the spring the second choice guy sustained a season ending injury. So up steps the very young third choice keeper to save the day and prove himself one of the best in the world at the tournament summer of 2010. I’ve always wondered what it must feel like to have his career catapulted to such superstardom on such incredibly difficult and sad circumstances. The escape of Sarah from the insidious Rancorn reminds me so vividly of my escape from my ex husband, about a year or so after I stopped reading fic. While my ex husband was no death eater, he was equally wrapped up in disturbing and exclusionary ideology. What I find most appealing about everything you write, besides the well written characters and the way you make me cheer for characters I never gave much thought to before, is that you take a fairytale story and make it so real. Take away the magic and these are things that truly happen in everyday mundane life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found out about this story yesterday, and i finisihed it in little bit more than 24 hours (a girl's still gotta work). it was a beautiful story of redemption, the power of love and family. I love the idea of the order of mercy, very fitting story for Bill and Percy behind the 7th book. thank you author for such a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() “I’m going to have that man’s babies!” YAAAASSSSS QUEEN! You do you, Audrey! You do you… By the way, you hit 800 reviews on March 19th, 2019. Congrats for reaching 900 reviews on February 22nd, 2022! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuteness fluff overload! Of COURSE it took Percy taking Fiendfyre like a blowtorch to the face for Audrey to realize she has fallen in love with him! But back to the subject of nicknames: Pucey’s pet name for Audrey kinda sucks. I hear ‘Audi’ and all I can see if a piece-of-shit car from Sweden! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy acting as double agent…. Audrey is a very good person not to feel any jealousy towards Penelope, the former girlfriend. Audrey should not feel like the other woman, because she is not. Also, can I just say I adore her pet name of ‘Gryffindor’ for him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why IS Bill angry? I would think he would be happy. Happy that his baby brother finally yanked his head out of his own arse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am glad they are back together, and that Audrey is thinking of Percy as her “lover”! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And thank you kindly for getting into such awesome detail regarding Ron’s time-out from the Hunt. We’ve all wondered what he was doing during his time at Shell Cottage. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWW! And she’s starting to meet the family! Her future brothers-in-law and her future mother-in-law. Maybe this will push Audrey back to where she belongs: in Percy’s arms. Although, I don’t like her and Fleur squabbling. They’re best friends. They are going to have to reconcile if they want to be sisters-in-law, married into the same family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! They finally kissed and made love! Or, as the British say it, SNOGGED and SHAGGED! I wonder who you fantasy cast as Audrey when you were writing this, because all I can picture is Jennifer Lawrence with her red updo in Don’t Look Up. Your thoughts? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how creative you made Audrey’s surname (and eventual maiden name): Sprayberry…. Sounds like a Dickens character. And her brother Seth is actually SAVAGE as hell! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "1998 could well be worse than the year they were leaving." This line may not have stood out at the time of writing, but it undoubtedly resonates with all of us now. |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this light in the dark story. You made it fit in so well with canon and portrayed your characters beautifully. I cried and laughed during this story and I'm afraid I binged it, but I Just couldn't put it down. Now I'm sort of raw inside and melancholy that it's over, but also very glad to have read it. Thank you! |