I can't tell you how excited I am about this!

It's here, it's here, it's HERE! *sings with excitement* You have no idea how READY I am for this adventure. You're off to a great start - your characterizations were lovely and the foundation was perfectly laid. As usual, I LOVE your characterization of Audrey. You conveyed so much about her (and her relationship with Fleur) in such few words. I especially love her dedication to non-profit work, and how badly she wants to do something that matters - the fact that she would agree to a blind date shows a lot, I think. Hehe. The first scene with Bill and Percy was spot-on; Bill WOULD be able to recognize Percy in the middle-aged man's face. And Percy's thoughts in the bathroom were so beautifully written, especially the bit about him being afraid of what he'll see in his father's eyes. But the last scene was my favorite! The description of the Order meeting from Fleur's eyes - Kingsley's quiet, watchful presence, Arthur's humility and reassuring air, one of the twin's elbow on the table, Tonks watching Molly like a mouse watching a cat - I could so clearly visualize it. And the little interaction between Tonks and Fleur was so moving: Fleur's bluntness when talking about Ted, Tonks's anger/bitterness when talking about Remus (THANK YOU for not turning her into a sobbing, helpless mess of a woman, as I have seen many people do), and the playful banter about Molly and the frying pan. That made me laugh out loud. Anyway, I'm extremely excited for what's yet to come, and I look forward to the next chapter. :)

AHHHH YES IT IS HERE I AM SO EXCITED FOR THIS. I love, love, LOVE how you're starting! I'm excited to see how the whole Fleur/Bill rescue mission stuff plays out, and also the Percy/Audrey love stuff that I'm sure will be happening at some point (and also I really hope we might get some cute Oliver/Katie too, because I still reread Pictures of You quite often). I cannot wait for the next chapter! Tuesdays are definitely going to become my favorite day of the week.