Reviews for Floating |
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![]() ![]() This was such a good story. There were many parts that made me giggle. The characters were well written and believable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh. Never realized that it was only the Stray Trio that was seriously injured. Everything back to normal. A decent ending. I read like only 2 of your works, but I noticed some traits. One-Alfred has a hero complex that is Good. Not annoying. Two-Russia is not so much Evil as ‘bad.’ He’s ‘Okay.’ Three-Finland is badass. Four-Arthur is fatherly. Five-Its Basically Married SuFin Six-The length makes things a bit tedious at times. It tends to drag on. Seven-Canada exists and is the Responsible Adult. Eight-America gets injured while being ‘heroic.’ Nine-Its semi-based around Alfred. Ten-Al is a sunshine ball that, at most, only irritates others. Eleven-Germany is boss. In a good way. Twelve-The Italies are generally useless. Thirteen-Japan is Calm Fourteen-There are no official ships (including SuFin), but there are enough hints of it for Love. It could be read either as Platonic or shippy. I personally really like this trait. Fifteen-Al has super strength and shows it. (Its Canon Folks. Use it.) Sixteen-Healing isn’t instant. Fast, but not instant. Seventeen-Natural Disasters Eighteen-A semi-lack of food that isn’t truely that troublesome. Nineteen-Concussions. Twenty-Ally has stuff on him that is minorly useful. Twenty One-Two spilt situational POVs. Twenty Two- Alfred is forgetful until he is semi-seriously injured. Twenty Three-Animals are helpful. Twenty Four- NA Twins. Mattie nickname. Twenty Five- America is cuddly when injured. Twenty Six-Human names but still counties. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whale! U included him! Yay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story. I'm surprised it isn't more popular. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to see Prussia's awesome lobster cosplay. . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() That hamburger . . . was actually a genius idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't disrespect the hamburger like that, Mattie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like Whale was right, Ludwing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When in doubt, follow the aquatic mammal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whale! I was wondering if he'd make an appearance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you, Hungary. The annoyingly awesome Prussia needs a nap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, at least R didn't throw Feli over. But where is Romano? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job with the socialization, Mattie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope that Romano didn't throw Feli overboard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the story! The fireworks bit was awesome. :D I wish you the best of luck on your writing! |