Reviews for Huntsmen Gamer vol 1
Ultimate Kuuga chapter 6 . 2/2/2017
Please, for the love of Oum, proofread your chapter before working on the next one. There are some serious grammar mistakes that someone, who isn't taking an English class, can easily spot.
Kamencolin chapter 6 . 2/3/2017
A nic fight seen this chapter
Raidentensho chapter 4 . 1/12/2017
not bad. looking forward to 'giri giri chambara' at some point. no doubt ruby will go chibi mode again when seeing lazer's lv.3 weapons. until the next one, ja ne!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/8/2017
do more this good this be more story.
Ultimate Kuuga chapter 2 . 11/18/2016
You really need a beta reader if you're gonna make more chapters for this story.

You even made a grammar mistake in the preview!

"Yang, you was too harsh for him."

It's supposed to be "were" instead of "was". -_-
Monkeys chapter 1 . 10/22/2016
Beta reader, get one !
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
I'm sorry to say this, I really do, but you seriously need a major overhaul on your grammar.
V3 chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
You need to think of a better plot, action scene, and dialogue with other characters. -_-
Drago chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Two words: BETA READER
Kamencolin chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Keep up the good work
brave kid chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Whoa cool
CrazyCriticer46 chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
Oh. My. God. Grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere. (O_O) It's really a pity to see you man, I really wish I could become a beta-reader for you.