Reviews for Stargaryan Ring
Mycarel Zeal chapter 9 . 7/6/2020
your story is good.. but so far it seems to me like it lacks direction.. its either that or your afraid to get things moving foward because so far.. all your chapters are almost the same.. all we see is jon getting better at things.. yet that doesnt make any impact in your story at all.. compare chapter 1 and chapter 9.. whats have you achieved so far with your plot? i see nothing..
Thean Bitter Crowe chapter 22 . 5/8/2020
This story kinda disappointing, it is filled with so many great ideas but they just work horrible together, and this chapter shows it.
WhiteKnightofHyrule chapter 23 . 4/28/2020
I really enjoyed this though as I just followed realized this was last updated Feb 2019 I missed that thought it was just this Feb. Given it's been over a year I hold little hope to see more. But I want to thank you for the entertaining read and wish you luck with whatever you are doing
nathan.vuong.5 chapter 22 . 4/15/2020
I really think that by giving everyone magic you've made jon much less impressive
FlashSonic7 chapter 23 . 3/22/2020
more please
Miwal cadarn Juubi Dovahkiin chapter 23 . 3/12/2020
I like how you incorporated the skyrim elder scrolls v leveling system. And am wondering when there might be more updates
4Eva Knight chapter 20 . 2/10/2020
I can't wait for more.
4Eva Knight chapter 19 . 2/10/2020
Great chapter,
4Eva Knight chapter 18 . 2/10/2020
Go Jon.
4Eva Knight chapter 17 . 2/10/2020
I'm pretty meh about Ygritte and i'm curious about what a Darklyn is doing in the North.
4Eva Knight chapter 16 . 2/10/2020
I love the different perspectives.
4Eva Knight chapter 15 . 2/10/2020
Great work Jon.
4Eva Knight chapter 14 . 2/10/2020
Cool seeing the reactions of how others perceive Jon.
4Eva Knight chapter 13 . 2/10/2020
Well that answers my magic worries. Great work.
4Eva Knight chapter 12 . 2/10/2020
Awesome. I'm a bit weary with overt magic mainly because oft he difficulty explaining it, but otherwise very cool.
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