HNNNNNNG, IT'S HAPPENING

I can't say much, mate. I mean I love the updates in their quality and quantity. But I simply can't wait to see the face those Asari biatches make when they learn the truth. Keep updating, sir!

Clearly this is about sending a message rather than just winning the battle, or else they would be approaching faster. Is the overall plan actually explained yet and I missed it, or will it be revealed in a chapter or two?

You tease! Come on, i want to see the tears, the regrets, the guilt, the apologies and pleas for mercy!

Right, thanks for letting me get that out of my system. As ever things are interesting, and i look forward to the next chapter. And as i do my bloodlust grows MWAH HA HA HA HAAAAAH!

Sorry, guess i still had a bit in me.

I want a chapter where shepherd or someone pretends that they are the last remaining humans and have a way to defeat the reapers JUST to find out that it was a big lie to make them group up to get slaughtered.

God, the Citadel is screwed. They can try to hide inside all they like, but the Catalyst can simply turn off the relays and open the arms back up. Udina's gonna have a blast.

Earth will never die

The only fault that I cannot overlook, is the reaper's speech pattern... They are eons-old-eldritch-machine-abominations, yet they talk like teenagers. I'm not sure if that's an attempt at humour or if it was accidental, but I can't really take it serious. Your story has some pretty dark and serious themes in it and these kind-of-moments ruins it a little... for me anyway.
Overall it's a great story. Very unique and interesting. Cheers.

First story of this kind that I have read. All around work well done.

Innovative, well written and interesting. Hope you keep it up.

Nice, I've never seen any story like this. 5 stars. I'm going to be eagerly following this.

The first taste of vengeance! The bit with the disabling the self destruct was beautiful. What was the information that Harper found? The citadel fleet increases? And why did the catalyst want to kill udina? It's really interesting how the human ascended are different from the other ascended. Maybe it's a part of being human, or that they actually train and plan rather than just juggernauting their way through everything. Looking forward to the next update! It'a good to be human

As much as I might disagree with the idea of Human Exceptionalism, your story has been entertaining. Vengeance is said to be best served cold but nothing is hotter than "frickin' laser beams."

And the idea of trying to out breed the cycle? Hilarious and ingenious. Nice idea and I tip my metaphorical hat to that.

I'll enjoy where you take this.

Regards,
Killerflood

great story

I am enjoying this one as much as I enjoyed Synthesis.

Galaxy, prepare thine anus.

Amazing I can't wait for the next chapter.
Will you be continuing?