Reviews for The Catalyst For Revenge
Verdauga chapter 58 . 6/27/2022
Neat.
Verdauga chapter 48 . 6/27/2022
Funny
Aetherium21 chapter 160 . 6/4/2022
Trying hard to avoid thinking that I have two chapters left until the end.
Aetherium21 chapter 147 . 6/3/2022
God this story is phenomenal. I’ve loved every second of it
Aetherium21 chapter 80 . 5/30/2022
Ahahaha “old married couple”
AceofAcesMobius1 chapter 90 . 5/22/2022
Gankutsuo, The Count of Monte Cristo, is already a space based rendition of Count. I know it's been years and years since this was written but it reminded me to tell you about it.
SympathyForTheQuarians chapter 162 . 4/16/2022
You could've named this story "Why I Despise The Asari: A One Million Word Treatise"

This is a pretty gross/disgusting world, but the writing is for the most part excellent. However, the extreme anti-asari bent was noticeable to the point of being distracting. Asari are arrogant and obnoxious, and their hiding of Vendetta was inexcusable. But they are NOT this bad.

I tried to incorporate some of your criticisms into E&D while toning it down a bit - the speech to the matriarchs definitely has a lot of influence from Catalyst.
Guest chapter 162 . 2/20/2022
Wow, what a trip. Thanks for writing!
kittenloveschristmas chapter 7 . 1/29/2022
#(*$ #(*$&O
Guest chapter 46 . 1/5/2022
Miroslav is a male name, to give it to a female its ugh
Marce98 chapter 162 . 1/4/2022
this is one of the few stories that cause unremitting hatred for the heroes. For the first time, I wanted Shepard to be tortured by Cenobites.
Mysts of Time chapter 41 . 11/21/2021
I'm sorry, but hit it kills me XD who knew Harper was a trekkie
Mondrial chapter 10 . 11/15/2021
I find it funny that turians have a Dreadnaught named like a human city. Astrakhan.
NEETsoc chapter 2 . 8/16/2021
This is one evil humanity. Analogous to the vaccine zombies of today
James chapter 162 . 8/12/2021
This is my second attempt at getting through this story. I don’t know what happened the last time around but I guess I got a bit lost between everything. This is a phenomenal story though it was a bit sad the humans turned out to be so evil, I guess that’s what happens when you put the illusive man in charge of remaking humanity, though I was disappointed that Shepard followed suit, I guess it could be a renegade Shepard. Regardless I digress, it was a brilliantly written story, I believe as far as empire building stories go this may be the only format that works, I would have liked a little bit faster plot progression and narrowing the number of perspectives down a bit more but thats honestly nitpicking at this point. I liked the empire building genre and despite the evilish empire this story still kept my interest to the end. I hope to see more :).

Oh a few quibbles, I know you’re probably trying to keep with mass effects you cannot understand ascension but it came off as a bit lazy from the ascended side, I felt I was able to understand most of it and that kindof made them refusing to explain rather infuriating. I found the casual throwing around of killing avatars and humans a bit weird, I think there was mentions of people being executed for suggestions and the proposal of a democracy early on? It felt a bit jarring considering Ashley was also present and also the killing Harper feels like it just slows or risks the project further. There’s a few more but it’s late here, I can’t remember them off the top of my head, and this review is already far too long :P.

TLDR: slow pacing but otherwise great story and hope to read more from you.
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