Reviews for The Catalyst For Revenge
CuriousQuinlan chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
great start!
Grey mage chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
Love it.

I do hope you don't just curb stomp the galaxy tho. Even if that's what happened in the game.
Grey mage chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
I love the premise. Humanity wanting revenge on the galaxy. But that back story is super interesting that I want I read it. It looks like an out line.

You should have made the deal that humanity doesn't lose its self determination.

Or am i missing that? Does shep offer enough bodies to make a reaper while leaving whats left over alone?
Parselmaster chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
Interesting premise. I am curious. :)
spiral83 chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
oh dear... looks like it's once again going to be an awesome story! renegade Humanity badassness... can't wait read the rest and what you have in store for us!
Gnaoh El Nart chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
One word for the "filthy xenos": Death

While I'm not exactly a fan of the Reapers, I must say that I smell pure HFY from here: Between a rock and a hard place, there isn't any positive outcome for human, so we'd go down with a bang, and bring those "treacherous allies" to hell with us.

It was painful, but it's the best scenario
Keedra2173 chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
Very nice. I like it. I hope the next chapter is soon.
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
Well... This is different.
Not sure how to react or say about this...but... it looks promising.
Feels like a complete surrender...but considering the circumstances...

Guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens next...
Rhodry-Arterius chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
You now have my attention ;P
Combat Engineer chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
Hot damn. A new fic? Let's do this.
deathleader chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
This is very interesting... And we you stop to think about it, some what logical for this Version Human race to do... When faced with extinction every alternative is preferable...
ChainzOfThePast chapter 2 . 10/10/2016
Based on your past stories i have read i would say this is an excellent start. My only comment is that you should double or even triple check your grammer is there were a decent few of them in here, mostly misspellings. I am eager to see this story come into fruition.
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