Reviews for The Catalyst For Revenge |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great start! |
![]() ![]() Love it. I do hope you don't just curb stomp the galaxy tho. Even if that's what happened in the game. |
![]() ![]() I love the premise. Humanity wanting revenge on the galaxy. But that back story is super interesting that I want I read it. It looks like an out line. You should have made the deal that humanity doesn't lose its self determination. Or am i missing that? Does shep offer enough bodies to make a reaper while leaving whats left over alone? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise. I am curious. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh dear... looks like it's once again going to be an awesome story! renegade Humanity badassness... can't wait read the rest and what you have in store for us! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word for the "filthy xenos": Death While I'm not exactly a fan of the Reapers, I must say that I smell pure HFY from here: Between a rock and a hard place, there isn't any positive outcome for human, so we'd go down with a bang, and bring those "treacherous allies" to hell with us. It was painful, but it's the best scenario |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. I like it. I hope the next chapter is soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... This is different. Not sure how to react or say about this...but... it looks promising. Feels like a complete surrender...but considering the circumstances... Guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens next... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You now have my attention ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot damn. A new fic? Let's do this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very interesting... And we you stop to think about it, some what logical for this Version Human race to do... When faced with extinction every alternative is preferable... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Based on your past stories i have read i would say this is an excellent start. My only comment is that you should double or even triple check your grammer is there were a decent few of them in here, mostly misspellings. I am eager to see this story come into fruition. |