Special Water!?

it's only chapter 11 and so much has happened and it doesn't even fell rushed I just love the way you write this is awesome

This was a really well thought out story and I'm honestly kind of glad that you ended up killing Naruto in the end. It worked well for the story and gave him the chance to continue helping his people from beyond the grave. I like how you were able to leave it open to a sequel but also give enough closure for this to end well. One suggestion would be to mark this story as a crossover for GOT and LOTR. I wasn't expecting it when I started the story and, while it works well together, it threw me off quite a bit at first. Overall, great work!

jesus christ you're basically borrowing just about EVERY FUCKING Game of Thrones/ASOIAF quote and shoving it here.

something tells me u were a big game of thrones/asoiaf fan when u wrote this

this is just a game of thrones/ a song of ice and fire fanfic with naruto elements

I like how you took elements of Game of Thrones and battles from Lord of the Rings and merged it with the warring states era in Naruto. It fits so well! I can definitely pick out the influences, but they mesh with the brutality of that day and age. Very well done! I can't wait to read the rest of the story XD

Plleeeaaaseseeee
Update
Can't wait for more weather in video or fic

Good

Good

so which Naruto is our Naruto the king or the son

damn i hope tobirama wont die

shadow clone wasn't invented yet

Just the first chapter, it's so fucking good

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