Reviews for Ripples in the Pond
Oblivious ninja IJ chapter 5 . 8/2
"... PIMP SLAP!"
...
...
...
He dead
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
Self Insert joins strawhats, how original. *yawn*
dandraft15 chapter 11 . 6/3
yeah you completely lost my interest in the story when you went and foreshadowed the conflict on a "cosmic" scale.
All the best with your writing.
flamelegendvargas chapter 27 . 5/27
Fucking hell is it like a requirement for SIs to get horrifically injured in some manner? Seriously Jones fucks her throat up more than me after 3 months of a burnt coil, Cross has limbs that would look more in place on Two-Face's body or Deadpool's and you... Yeah blind. Oof. You got Ichigo'd without a power up to heal your eyes real fast.
justlovereadin chapter 17 . 4/2
Cross and Soundbite for the win Jones comes in second and Evan got destroyed
Guest chapter 9 . 3/22
Is that an SAO Abriged reference at the end I see?
ZF IAnswerToNoOne chapter 9 . 3/6
Did you just copy that quote from SAOA and just adjust it to fit One Piece? Of so, I completely approve! If not, it's completely fine!
Asshole Reviewer chapter 20 . 3/2
This is pretty much heavily influenced by this bites and intentional or not you are using fairly similar changes in the story

and seriously Nami acting like Yang? Their characters are nowhere alike
Isamaru chapter 31 . 2/27
Damn! Well, this isn't my favorite si(This bites! And sleeping with the girls have the girls) has you beat there. But damn if this isn't one HELL of a tale! Keep up the amazing work, my friend!
Dr swagger chapter 6 . 2/24
Every step hurt like the 2016 presidential election. Lol I’m dead.
Stopdropanroll chapter 31 . 2/4
I really like your choices recently with the story! It's a good read!
UGANDAN KNUCKLES chapter 1 . 1/21
He's Jesus
It's the Jesus Jesus no mi
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 31 . 1/19
Awesome a great build teamwork and the main fights to come!
Thomas Drovin chapter 31 . 1/19
Hey there welcome back for 2018! It seems Crocodile had his work cut out battling both Luffy AND Smoker, I loved how Smoker backed up Vivi when she had to go to the Straw Hats for help due to Crocodile's schemes. Unfortunately Crocodile DID end up getting away however...at least they got Evan back. I like how Luffy pointed out HE'S the one to do CRAZY things and not him...with that out of the way they now have to get the hell AFTER Crocodile! See you next chapter whenever you can manage it so I can see what happens next!
MayaHikari chapter 31 . 1/19
Not using your men to end a coup sooner generates more death. pride and ego is not a good payment for lives. good intentions is funny and good quality for anime but I don't see it in real life. you just delayed saving someone and lengthen someone's terror. [current dark mood]. Go Luffy! beat up Croc again!
361 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »