Reviews for The Sum of Us
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 6/26
Awesome. Thank you
asam75 chapter 1 . 6/23
That was good. I find myself wanting more. Thank you.
irelandk chapter 1 . 2/6
:-)
LoveBite92 chapter 1 . 2/5
OH DAMN! This was amazing! I really hope you write more xx
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2017
What will happen next? You have to finish this! Will wife come to see Bella in the hospital and find her Jazzy? What about New York? It so sad that some people, such as Eric and Riley, won’t be together even though they’re soulmates. I would think a world like this would be more open and accepting because no one can chose their other half, it’s destined.
tinksauble chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
I totally loved this concept...
Thanks for taking the time to write it.
xBellaLunax chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
Continue please. This has been one of the best stories I’ve read in a long while. You could do so much with this if you continue. I really hope you do.
mjwpg chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
I just discovered this one shot and loved it, any plans on expanding it?
Thanks
Monica
Jadeeeee chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
Oh my god this was phenomenal. You are a spellbinding author. Aaaahhhhhhhhhhs. Asdfgjklll
Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Lovely!
Sukiethree chapter 1 . 7/10/2017
Wow! Really love the idea of The Connection. I'd love to read more if you ever decide to write more
annaharding chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
Wow! Love their connection. Love the idea that there IS the other half of you, waiting out there somewhere. Wish it were real.
So... where did Riley go? Did he not even come in to check up on her? Just wondering.
Thanx for sharing!
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 4/13/2017
Loved this story.
DreamerRoad chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
That was wonderful.
my2galspal chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
Wow! That was an awesome story line. I can definitely see why you did so well in the contest.

Thanks for sharing your writing with the rest of us.
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