Reviews for The Sum of Us
tinksauble chapter 1 . 11/9
I totally loved this concept...
Thanks for taking the time to write it.
xBellaLunax chapter 1 . 11/2
Continue please. This has been one of the best stories I’ve read in a long while. You could do so much with this if you continue. I really hope you do.
mjwpg chapter 1 . 10/16
I just discovered this one shot and loved it, any plans on expanding it?
Jadeeeee chapter 1 . 9/17
Oh my god this was phenomenal. You are a spellbinding author. Aaaahhhhhhhhhhs. Asdfgjklll
Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 8/10
Sukiethree chapter 1 . 7/10
Wow! Really love the idea of The Connection. I'd love to read more if you ever decide to write more
annaharding chapter 1 . 4/21
Wow! Love their connection. Love the idea that there IS the other half of you, waiting out there somewhere. Wish it were real.
So... where did Riley go? Did he not even come in to check up on her? Just wondering.
Thanx for sharing!
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 4/13
Loved this story.
DreamerRoad chapter 1 . 3/25
That was wonderful.
my2galspal chapter 1 . 3/12
Wow! That was an awesome story line. I can definitely see why you did so well in the contest.

Thanks for sharing your writing with the rest of us.
JustARead chapter 1 . 3/6
Cool concept!
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 3/4
Amazing! I love your imagination and this story! This certainly did deserve to win first place public vote. Congratulations!
sosueme chapter 1 . 2/23
I love auto-bonding/fantasy stories. Yours was especially good with lots of anticipation. I loved the way the couple feel 'together' when they meet thanks to the multiple connections. Thanks for sharing!
Debs chapter 1 . 1/24
So very sweet.
TheGreenPanther chapter 1 . 1/23
The alert got lost in my email, soi just read this. So good! :0)
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