Reviews for The Sum of Us
Michele chapter 1 . 7/16
Loved this one shot. I think this would be an amazing story to expand on. Thank you!
luvyateamedward chapter 1 . 7/2
Well i'm just blown away again by your writing! I'm just itching for more. Thanks for sharing!
helenemc chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
Beautiful story! Loved that connection.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
So beautiful!
LillianBroderick chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
Lovely
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Amazing story
alli62 chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
Wouldn’t that be so lovely? To know your “person” is out there?

Beautiful story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
parkesy23 chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
Awesome. Thank you
asam75 chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
That was good. I find myself wanting more. Thank you.
irelandk chapter 1 . 2/6/2018
:-)
LoveBite92 chapter 1 . 2/5/2018
OH DAMN! This was amazing! I really hope you write more xx
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2017
What will happen next? You have to finish this! Will wife come to see Bella in the hospital and find her Jazzy? What about New York? It so sad that some people, such as Eric and Riley, won’t be together even though they’re soulmates. I would think a world like this would be more open and accepting because no one can chose their other half, it’s destined.
tinksauble chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
I totally loved this concept...
Thanks for taking the time to write it.
xBellaLunax chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
Continue please. This has been one of the best stories I’ve read in a long while. You could do so much with this if you continue. I really hope you do.
mjwpg chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
I just discovered this one shot and loved it, any plans on expanding it?
Thanks
Monica
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