|Reviews for From the bunker|
| Faery66 chapter 2 . 2/18
Hope to read more soon.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2016
Wall of text is a thing, the paragraphs run on far to long. You need to cut them into five or so pieces instead of having them all in one. While I can read as is the effort to do so is to much, if you expect me or some others to do so this would have to be a work of art.
It's not, but don't give up and simply fix that one mistake okay? Keep at it and experience should help greatly in time.
| Gensplejs chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
Shame its not the moon. I would love to see an Iron SkyHarry Potter cross over
| The Shadowman chapter 2 . 10/14/2016
Coll nazi potter this should turn out well
| The Shadowman chapter 1 . 10/11/2016
Glad to see that someone is using grindlewald, he is such an underused character.