You're writing sucks. Sadly, the plot, which is amazing, doesn't make up for it.

It's literally called chakra paper. Litmus paper tells acids from bases, And they would have that too.

Another thing is that it isn’t worse than Orochimaru considering the third survives. The only thing that was made worse is that instead of the uchihas being victims now they are villains fucking great plot point.

Why didn’t you get rid of the hyugas too and the other clan heads.

It was unnecessary and the uchihas could have simply left and it would have been so much better

Honestly yeah you were right that the scenario is badly received. it was a bad decision to create this scenario because it makes no sense without anything it would have ended the same like otl. Why wouldn’t Itachi still be used like in canon? He may not be an ANBU but he still overpowered and loyal to the hokage.

Great story one of the best I've read on this site

I found this story and I'm loving every chapter. i really love how you actually change the story rather than just the same story but with Naruto being more OP. IN any case, I don't think Sarutobi losing to Fugaku is far fetched, considering Fugaku is said to be on par with Minato and he had a team of elite uchiha members at his side. You have done a great job.

i didnt think i could get so invested in a reread as to write a review but here i am lol. i just disagree with the choice to nerf naruto in this fight so damn hard. like the reasoning IN UNIVERSE makes sense but it did feel like you wanted to backtrack on making him as strong as he was, which doesnt make sense to me. if he has these abilities, let him use them lol. another horrible loss also felt unneccesary but shit happens i guess.

I feel like Kakashi should've been the assault squad jonin rather than kurenai. I get that kakashi has dog summons so he fits but he's far more "assault" oriented than kurenai is

I don't think hiruzen would lose to fugaku and some Uchiha fodders, especially how he "dies" from not being able to notice he's in a genjutsu

As much as I hate to say it, but what Obito said about his sensei was kind of true you know.

I must say that if Naruto truly took a peek at Hinata's rack, then he should be glad that he didn't take too long to do it because if he did, then I'm not sure what Hinata would have done to him. I really don't blame him for doing it because if I had such an amazing girlfriend like Hinata, then I might look at her breasts a little longer you know.

Shikamaru’s line to Ino though lmao.

I can slowly start to see why Jiraiya would have a crush on Tsunade and I felt that at least his crush on Tsunade was at least more healthy than Naruto's crush on Sakura you know.

It’s so damn good to see Tenten finally get some attention.

Okay damn Kurenai.

Granted she’s right but damn. Savage.