I really enjoyed most of this story and a lot of the changes that happened.
However as much as giving Naruto to much makes for a bad story, I feel you have gone to far in reverse.
Also, given the personalities and situations leading up to the point in the story I stopped. I find it quite ridiculous that anyone other than Naruto would receive the Rinnegan. Between his massive Chakra, senjutsu mastery, possession of Kurama and his own personal feelings and promises related to the other tailed beasts.
Having described the final events leading to me dropping this fic, I will state once again that I truly enjoyed the shifts early on that lead to interesting character arcs and growth. Unfortunately I feel that those changes are not fully reflected in what happens in the latter half of what o read.
Normally I don't post stuff for anything, but I really enjoyed your story style and wished to express such and what made me drop the story. Sorry if what I have said isn't helpful or seems pointless. As I said I don't normally write stuff like this.

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. Thank you for a fantastic story. I enjoyed the entire work.

I actually agree with you about the Sharingan and Orocimaru... with how many of the more useful and powerful jutsus can't be copied by them it's not that much of a problem for him to have them (especially since I think there is a trend with him: he knows all these jutsus and wants to learn more, yet he always sticks to the same techniques he always uses and almost never deviates... the problem with orochimaru lies in a completely different direction: his inhuman experiments)
I dislike the Sharingan because Kishimoto continues to make them more and more powerful shile removing any and all drawbacks, and at the same time every other Bloodline and clanjutsu stays the same... unless an Uchiha uses it, then it suddenly is more effective, powerful or both... that made me really dislike the Uchihas and everything associated with them (except Itachi and Shisui of course)

That ending is soooooo Jiraiya-like it could be canon XD
I like it

I know that I shouldn't be too surprised to learn when Kiba sound a lot like Yamcha for being so defeatist and not really that motivated to become stronger just from seeing Naruto and Fu's spar, but I still can't help but remember Yamcha because that might be his line of thinking after the Android saga you know.

But if you kill Orochimaru here, then how will Sasuke, Itachi and Shisui deal with the event of the Sasuke Shinden novel man. By killing Orochimaru here, I think this will cause a little bit of a plot hole during that period of time man.

I noticed the irony when Anko said to the Sound trio that they're more than likely to be used as sacrifice to those reanimated zombies you know, because it ended up happening to Zaku and Kin in canon you know.

Suna did have a jinchuruki before his name was bunpaku he was some kind of monk i think and he was even able to befriend shukaku

They should've given us the scene of Maito Dai fighting The Seven Swordsman.

Meh, like I wrote in the last comment this civil war would be the end of konoha simply because the other villages would attack them since they are weaker than ever.

Also kinda disagree on your portrayal of Obito. Why would he show himself so openly? Why wouldn’t he do it like in the canon event that he would kill silently ninja?

Great story so far

Though I think the prize is too high and it would leave konoha broken beyond repair if the hyuga, the uchiha and the smaller clans are being decimated.

This civil war is by far far worse in comparison. In comparison to the snake sannins invasions that’s far more than an just a bigger impact.

I know that you let Sumire keeping her crush on Boruto, but now I can't help but wonder if Sarada kept her crush on Boruto here in your story from canon or not.

“Lightning Release: Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Thunder Strikes” IS THE COOLEST AND DOPEST THING YOU COULD EVER DO FOR HINATA!

First of all I also loved the bonding moments between Hinata and Temari you know because I felt that Temari can be a better closer friend to Hinata than Sakura does you know because they can understand each other's position than Sakura does you know. Second of all, I really loved how you made Naruto search more reasons for him to become Hokage other than for his own egos you know.