Nice! Was not expecting that ending! Very well written story. Thank you so much for sharing it! Happy Halloween!

Oh it was an incredible tale so worth the read!
Thank you very much for sharing this little baby :)
*love love*

Sensational!
Thank you.

Great story, and wonderful imagination! Thank you!

Oh pleasssse continue this! It's so refreshing to read something different for a change. There is a greater story to be told so please continue this story.

Great story. Loved it.

I loved it. It was different.
Good luck in the contest.

Best Halloween story ever! Loved the detail!

Makes me wonder if Isabella hadn't been so lonely that the Devil would have been able to seduce her so easily. Shows how important love is in this world. Love is what gives this world hope and will always keep our world bright so we can fight that heavenly battle to keep the darkness from overtaking us.

This was such a clever story! I never thought about how much the vampire and the devil have in common! I love the banter between the angels (SO clever- Rosalie and Carlisle) and Edward/Lucifer- handsome devil he surely is!

Boy, you did a lot of research about Halloween and jack-o'-lanterns! And I love the lore you invented about the devil being able to walk the earth on Halloween but then getting sucked back down.
GREAT STORY!
xo
BOH

Whoa. I didn't expect Angela at the end.

great story! so creative!

Love this story! Especially loved this Devil Edward! I wish you the best of luck on this contest !

Thank you for your entry. Good luck!
XO
Ohgeefantasy

Great job;
Good luck in the contest.
Happy Halloween!