Reviews for Welcome to Hummingbird Haven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As soon as Edward rubbed the lotion on twice I knew there was going to be something happening other than what Esme wanted. Love the imagination! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I love how Carlisle outwitted Esme. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. I hope you continue it because I want to know Edward's POV and what happens next after Bella became high priestess and changed everything. I was hoping Edward would go looking for her, but I was thought it would happen before she gave birth. Thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a cool adaptation of mythology and magic and Halloween! I loved the ceremony and the rules and the pairing off and the lovely, fluid way they mated. You did such a great job building this world. Thanks for submitting your story to the contest! It was a fun read! BOH |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for your entry. Good luck! Xo Ohgeefantasy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite enjoyed this story. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's an awesome story line. Good luck int the contest. Happy Halloween |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for writing - good luck in the contest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Loved it. I was hooked. Loved seeing how it was going to pan out. I wondered if Edward would turn up somehow. Not quite expecting that turn round. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I love it this was great thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good luck in the contest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was interesting. thank you for sharing your story with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was interesting! I wonder if you'll expand?! |