Reviews for Welcome to Hummingbird Haven
SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 11/6/2016
As soon as Edward rubbed the lotion on twice I knew there was going to be something happening other than what Esme wanted. Love the imagination!
sujari6 chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
Great story. I love how Carlisle outwitted Esme.
Sara aka Nikki Black chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
I loved it. I hope you continue it because I want to know Edward's POV and what happens next after Bella became high priestess and changed everything. I was hoping Edward would go looking for her, but I was thought it would happen before she gave birth.
Thank you for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
bornonhalloween chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
What a cool adaptation of mythology and magic and Halloween! I loved the ceremony and the rules and the pairing off and the lovely, fluid way they mated. You did such a great job building this world.
Thanks for submitting your story to the contest! It was a fun read!
BOH
OhGeeFantasy chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Thank you for your entry. Good luck!
Xo
Ohgeefantasy
Everleigh Allen chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
I quite enjoyed this story. Well done!
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 1 . 10/23/2016
It's an awesome story line.
Good luck int the contest.
Happy Halloween
ceceprincess1217 chapter 1 . 10/21/2016
great job!
Hadley Hemingway chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Thank you for writing - good luck in the contest!
Taylor9901 chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
I want more.
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
Wow.
Loved it.
I was hooked.
Loved seeing how it was going to pan out.
I wondered if Edward would turn up somehow.
Not quite expecting that turn round.
mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
Oh I love it this was great thank you
LaPumuckl chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Good luck in the contest!
dustybritches01 chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
That was interesting. thank you for sharing your story with us.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
This was interesting! I wonder if you'll expand?!
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