I love slice of life and all, but where is the action, the Haki training, the eventual meeting with Garp?

This child shall be OP.

-Mihawk

Devoured this fic, loving ever second of the swee slow burn

I like this chapter as always, but I hope she doesn’t go around telling and teaching everyone her Haki secrets and inventions. What is the point if everyone knows it? Honestly, it’s crazy to me he asked her to teach his people everything she discovered and she didn’t object. I would have.

Riskua’s presence as Luffy’s sister makes this story interesting so I hope that you eventually come back to it and continue. It’d be fun to see if Luffy’s more eccentric and impulsive decisions get tampered down a bit due to her influence. I just wish that she and Ace had developed more before this story hit Hiatus.

idk if you still read comments for this fic but I just wanted to let you know that for the longest time I really thought that Sabo was a wind logia user (i read this fic around sabaody). Imagine my surprise when i meet him in dressrosa trying to win ace's fruit lol. I guess Sabo inheriting Ace's fruit makes much more sense but Sabo seems so wind power coded? I really thought I spoiled myself with him getting a wind logia fruit only for it to be fake . Anyways I absolutely love ur fic (this is like my 3rd reread but i never rlly thought to comment) The way you write is very beautiful and flowy 3

i love love love this story, have since you first started writing it! but also, a chapter or 2 ago you said Ri left her hat on the boat to not have to worry about the sand...

I know this hasn’t been updated in ages but I gotta say I just spend my entire night (to 3am) burning my way through it because it was just too good to stop, love it, would love to see you pick it back up some day because I absolutely love how you write everyone and the dynamics you’ve crafted are so *chefs kiss*

Really wish you kept writing. Loved this story. It actually changes a lot of the canon, which is more than can be said for other fics. Other fics just have the OC there when the same exact things happen that happened in the manga/anime, only with the OC forcing a new sentence in between what the other crew always say. I like how this story actually changes things. Please consider getting back to writing!

So ive just binge read this and i love it, i hope there will be more soon! ive added it to subscription list on a03

Nooooooo i finished ittttttt, dang it all my food is gone now. This fanfiction is just so awesome! I love Riskua as a character and her interactions with the ASL. And the story is just so yummy with all the changes you’ve made and even if I’ve read plenty of one piece fanfictions this one isn’t repetitive in any way. There isn’t excessive descriptions where its not needed and all the important plot points are covered! One piece is a really big series so lingering on little arcs like the little garden one kind of become a little tedious so I was relieved we weren’t gonna go over every single detail!
Its so sad it hasnt updated in 5 years though TT this fanfiction is such a gem and i was really excited to get to the romantic aspect of it too! Even if Ace is the final pairing I really like Riskua and Zoro too! Thats really the only gripe i have about the story, that Riskua isn’t as straight forward when it comes to involving herself with others as Sabo or Ace are, but maybe thats just me not wanting her to get into a relationship with Ace completely inexperienced (and really cuz I feel its fair for her to have her fun too since Ace did as well) but thats really just a part if her character and that’s okay, it’s completely understandable.
I really hope you come back! I’ll follow this story for now and wait hopefully!

Shanks is a dumb-dumb hahahaha. Mohawk is looking for Riskua!

A shame it was dropped.

Hope the muses allow you to Come back to this! Wonderful story!

The talk lmfao poor riskua