Love this first chaptera

Estou amando a fic, ela é muito envolvente e confesso que você arrasou ao juntar Ron e Luna, é uma combinação surpreendente que deu super certo, estou ansiosa para os próximos capítulos.

and you jsut had to ruin it

it's peek ... something, when one is worried about demeaning a race of fantasy creatures. i suppose you're a card carrying member of spew?

The rules remind me more of Gibbs' rules from NCIS.

Can't help but cheer aloud that the characters have grown a spine against the harridan and the manipulator.
Thanks for the alternate character development in this story!

Lord, leave Dumbledore alone! Dora's condemnation of him reaches the point of absurdity. No general will tell each of his soldiers all the information. This is pointless and harmful. Dumbledore was looking for horcruxes, relying on secrecy, and this is absolutely justified. If Voldemort had found out about these searches and hidden at least one Horcrux, everything would have been over.
In Dora, or in you, the author speaks of a touchy teenager, but not an adult who understands the concept of forced secrecy and trust (read subordination) to his commanders. In canon, the Order of the Phoenix believed in Dumbledore, and as it turned out, it was not in vain.
The fact that Dora stopped trusting only because she saw several deaths and was offended by the hidden information only makes her an extremely unreliable person who can ruin the whole case.
In fact, it would be even interesting to read this. In the end, with good intentions...

Ah yes, the good old cliché with the all-knowing Luna. Why people spoil this rather sweet and tragic character with all sorts of superpowers is absolutely incomprehensible to me. -10 points for that.

Luna is simply wonderful lmao

Really enjoyed this Tonks time travel story. Im looking forward to the continued story. Well done and thanks for sharing!

loved this story. just binged the whole thing

Yes! I really hoped for a Hermione/Harry/Tonks ending. She's just too awesome (in this fic) to be left out of the main pairing. If you ended up pairing her with anyone else, it would feel too much as a cop out

Concerning your comments about the Goblin language. You're absolutely correct and yet I think in the context it's also correct to use the name when it's a wizard POV. The wizarding world is rife with bias. And even the people who are the "good" guys may not recognize their own bias. Would the Goblins themselves refer to their language thus? Absolutely no, but you can guarantee that Witches and Wizards do and have been for centuries. The word "squaw" comes to mind for the rl reference.

Meh. What a clisterfuck. Potter is the worst person in the story, I started to sympathise with Snape on this one. So many possibilities to make things right yet instead they ran into the fray like headless chickens.

I do realize it's built on canon shitpile, yet couldn't they fucking sent Patronuses to bigwigs all over? Well at least they're using the floo instead of a fucking flying horses.